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Hunny.kuku 11-24-2007 12:18 AM

Help please ? TT__TT
 

Hum , Hello ! I am new here so I am not sure if I am doing this right but I am in need of some help with this drawing I am doing.
I can't seem to fix what is wrong. . .Anyone got any advice / Red lines they could give me? Thankyou.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q.../trythreex.jpg

Hum I tried to re-try the elbow and right arm but I don't think I changed very much . . i think i ended up tracing over my lines again @[email protected]

Livia 11-24-2007 12:59 AM

I think it's cool. It just need to be dressed I guess xD


Hunny.kuku 11-24-2007 01:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Livia
I think it's cool. It just need to be dressed I guess xD


Thanks.
Yup I was planning to do that after I got the anatomy right XD.

Livia 11-24-2007 01:10 AM

You do that! xD I would like to know how it wil end up the art =3

fuyumi_saito 11-24-2007 03:42 AM

It's really cute. I don't see anything wrong with it.. Just make the lines cleaner..The arms look right with the dark green.. It's very good. I wish I could draw bodies lol. XD

Hunny.kuku 11-24-2007 03:58 AM

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Originally Posted by fuyumi_saito
It's really cute. I don't see anything wrong with it.. Just make the lines cleaner..The arms look right with the dark green.. It's very good. I wish I could draw bodies lol. XD

Thankyou >w<
Yup , This was just a sketch before I do the lineart . .
Thanks again !
XD I knows I never draw bodies so I was a bit worried about how this would turn out.

Dystopia 11-24-2007 05:21 AM

It looks very good to me. Try to smooth out the lines a little, since the upper half is all nice and clear and the bottom is sketchy. Or make the top half sketchy. xD Whatever works for you.

Penny 11-24-2007 05:42 AM

How old is this girl? Because it looks just fine and dandy so long as you're looking for the young look. And looks pretty darn good even if it was older, but the shoulders might need to be a bit bigger.
Little things. I think it looks great.

disturbed66 11-24-2007 08:42 AM

First off, I love the face! shes *im only guess* Looks soo cute ^ ^
but the line for the her leg just seems to be in the wronge area.. it may not be just me being goofy..
But thats al that really throws me off. and heck when you add cloths i bet it well fix any kind of proublem that you see ^ ^

Penny 11-24-2007 09:40 AM

Wait... what are you guessing?

Faunia 11-24-2007 04:39 PM

The only thing that really stands out to me is that her left arm appears to be too short. Even positioned further back in the picture, her arm would still be a bit longer.

Hunny.kuku 11-29-2007 11:19 PM

Ah. Thankyou so much you guys for all the comments !!

Amiiu 12-05-2007 01:19 AM

It's so cute ^^
Except the left arm is bugging me, it looks kind of awkward.


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