Hum , Hello ! I am new here so I am not sure if I am doing this right but I am in need of some help with this drawing I am doing.
I can't seem to fix what is wrong. . .Anyone got any advice / Red lines they could give me? Thankyou.



Hum I tried to re-try the elbow and right arm but I don't think I changed very much . . i think i ended up tracing over my lines again @[email protected]

I think it's cool. It just need to be dressed I guess xD

Originally Posted by Livia

I think it's cool. It just need to be dressed I guess xD

Thanks.
Yup I was planning to do that after I got the anatomy right XD.

You do that! xD I would like to know how it wil end up the art =3

It's really cute. I don't see anything wrong with it.. Just make the lines cleaner..The arms look right with the dark green.. It's very good. I wish I could draw bodies lol. XD

Originally Posted by fuyumi_saito

It's really cute. I don't see anything wrong with it.. Just make the lines cleaner..The arms look right with the dark green.. It's very good. I wish I could draw bodies lol. XD

Thankyou >w<
Yup , This was just a sketch before I do the lineart . .
Thanks again !
XD I knows I never draw bodies so I was a bit worried about how this would turn out.

It looks very good to me. Try to smooth out the lines a little, since the upper half is all nice and clear and the bottom is sketchy. Or make the top half sketchy. xD Whatever works for you.

How old is this girl? Because it looks just fine and dandy so long as you're looking for the young look. And looks pretty darn good even if it was older, but the shoulders might need to be a bit bigger.
Little things. I think it looks great.

First off, I love the face! shes *im only guess* Looks soo cute ^ ^
but the line for the her leg just seems to be in the wronge area.. it may not be just me being goofy..
But thats al that really throws me off. and heck when you add cloths i bet it well fix any kind of proublem that you see ^ ^

Wait... what are you guessing?

The only thing that really stands out to me is that her left arm appears to be too short. Even positioned further back in the picture, her arm would still be a bit longer.

Ah. Thankyou so much you guys for all the comments !!

It's so cute ^^
Except the left arm is bugging me, it looks kind of awkward.