I sketched a little picture of a girl in a bikini yesterday while I was trying to get a grip on a more simple style. Bored, I wrote her a little story. The one on this image is a cut down version of the story.
I decided to turn it onto something a bit more 'artistic.'

Its just a little something, with themes of objectification and loss of identity.

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Nicely done.. I like the flashing question mark where her face is, it seemingly strips her of her identity.

Poetic, I like it^^
It's nice to know people actually have some talent these days, you have potential~
Though, I shouldn't be one critiquing, I'm no good at writing poetry myself :P
I do love ones that I really have to think about to figure out though :D
Keep it up! You should make this thread sort of your... creative outlet! Post your work up on here or something and have people give you feedback^^
Just an idea~

Wow. Deep. DX

-wobbles-

Really. It is. Labels...stereotypes.

Strange how people need to put those things to make things easy...making others easy and stuff. I like! <3

Hmm? *tips head to the side* That's a bit odd...

I love this! I think its made all the more interesting by the question mark on her face and in the right hand corner, but the thing that really gets me is the bit about the cell phone camera, I've never really liked the thought of someone being able to walk into a change room and take pictures of people, the same goes for the beach and the gym and anywhere else were you don't really want your picture taken.
but enough rambling the point is this is a great work and I love it! you did a really amazing job!

This is very well done. The little story that goes with her sounds like a drabble. Its not my most favorite meaningful story, but I like it very much. =D

I also like the drawing of the girl, although her chest looks a little awkward and so does her middle.

@Berginyon: That was the effect I was aiming for, so I'm glad it worked.

@Mynx: I don't know if its poetry so much as 'some shit what i thought up and wrote down' or at least, when I was writing it I didn't think it was a poem.
I might post more work here, though most of it won't have a serious subject I imagine.

@whitebeast: I'm glad you like it. <3

@chibilady18: I think camera phones can be fun, but they're used for a lot of mischief and terrible things. </3

@Dystopia: If you think the story is drabble, you should have seen the unedited version. It was _definitely_ drabble. <3333