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Rando's Art
So I just wanted some feedback on my one of my bases.
This is my biggest base to date, and I prolly won't make much bigger ones. I enjoy working with very little pixels. http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y27...BaseNotUse.png And this is my first doll made using that base: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y27.../RandoVamp.png My second doll, this one wasn't based on anything: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y27...PurpleDoll.pnghttp://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y27...DollBigger.png I enlarged her so you could see the detail better. A lot of detail so sometimes it gets lost with it being so small. So, what do you think? And please give me a bit more to work with than "Good" or "Could be better". n__N |
its good but the stockings dont show well and i dont know if your hair was meant to be black or grey like you have now
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Aww! <3
Its so cute! The head's a little awkward because of its size, but otherwise, I love him! |
It was meant to be black.
As for the stockings, that's a little hard to change because of the size of the base. |
The ears seem to be in a strange shape, and the neck seems kind of long for the small body. I love the blue eyes though, in red it looks like the person is evil >>;;
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@Anna: Is the head too big? I was going for a chibi, so it can be a little anatomically incorrect, but is it too much that it looks awkward?
@Amiiu: Thank you. n__n The ears were suppose to be a little pointy, and elvish. But I can work with with the neck comment! I'll try editing it and such to see what looks best. As for the red eyes, they do look evil but when I'm not wearing my eyepatch, I wear the Amarande contacts. |
I think it's cute, he looks like he's gonna cry ^^
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It looks good but I personally thing makinbg the neck maybe 1-2 pixels on boths sides? But that might make it look kinda wierd. :3
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ooh, pretty good. The eyes are a little too strong... I think the base meant it to be lighter. The only part i see a little strange is the hair. It might just be your style, but it's unrealistic. The doll is 3d, and the hair being so short makes the head look 2d.
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Aww..They are very cute.
Did you make it from examples of other people's work? It looks similar to this one girl's stuff..Espcially with the little thingy under it.>_< but I do like it, very cute. I'm sure you could open a pixel shop(unless you have one already) and sell some ^^ |
And what about the hair on the second doll?
The hair on the first doll wouldn't be an accurate pixel doll of my avatar if it did have longer hair. But I don't really understand your comment on it being 2d compared to my 3d doll. My hair has both shades and highlights. @Neck comments: On the second doll, the neck is a pixel shorter. Do it look better? Edit: @ fuyumi: I did take the idea of putting my name under them from KawaiiHannah, but I'm not the only who does it that way. n__n It might have not even been KawaiiHannah who started it. All I used from her was the palette she has on her website. Everything was pixeled without references. |
Wow, cute base xD
I quite like them :3 At first I thought the neck was a little long/skinny compared to the head, but when you actually draw clothes on them, it looks alright :3 And mini Rando ish cute! xP |
Thank you! n__n
The neck was originally a little long, and I didn't see it till I really took a good look at the base. But I redid it. The second doll has the new neck, a pixel shorter. And it looks much better in my opinion. ^__^ |
You're welcome ^^
It does look a lot better :3 Wow, the pixel shorter kinda actually does make a difference xD On mini-Rando, the previous base with the pixel longer neck looks good :3 |
Thank you. :D
I think it looked better with the longer neck because of the neck tie thingy. With a smaller neck, the tabot would be really small. |
The second one is also really nice.
But her hair could use a little more shading. |
Thank you. n__n
Hair is my weak spot, and her hair is probably the best I've done to date. But I could always improve. :D |
On the second doll, on the right side of the hair, the curled ones and the face that they're in a darker shade kind of bugs me xP
But the neck looks much better now, and like the_anna135 said, there should be more shading on the hair. |
xD
I think they're cute bases. ♥ |
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