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*headdesk* Come find all the problems for me?
I've worked on this piece for far too long, so I know I can't see everything that's wrong with it.
Please take a look and tell me things that need to be fixed. I know a lot of them, but too tired to list them out at the moment. I know the lighting is completely and totally ass backwards. Please forget mentioning that unless you want to tell me a particular place shadow/extra light could be added. http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/5...ealiciail9.jpg |
The character on the right has a short arm (right arm)... other then that, I do not see anything wrong.
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Look amazing to me! I can't see anything even remotely wrong with it. |
It's kind of creepy looking... It's very 3-D though...but is that what you were going for? if not..then all the shadeing may be a bit much..
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The eyes and mouth look a little off to me. And the person on the right's left arm (our right) seems kind of short, like it should be a little longer. Also, it's hard to see the two seperate legs of the person on the left, and the person on the right's right (our left) leg just kind of seems to disappear.
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Thanks for the input everyone. <3
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The faces of the two larger girls look distorted.
And maybe try and shade the pants? They look sorta blank. |
the pants on the blonde girl needs some gray in it, not all black since the other girl as them. The black haired one needs some more wrinkles on the end of her shirt , a little longer would make it look better, so it doesn't appear as the pants are over teh shirt, but the other way around.
the scarf is perfect |
I think the girl with the braid's eyes are weird.
The right eye is like ... looking to a different place than the other. The lips look kinda weird... maybe more upper lip ? Other than that I like it a lot. |
i love everythign but not the mouths I think they are too ig and weird shaped.
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