im writing a story, but sadly it hasn't been named yet. actually its a series, and only one of teh books have been named, but its one of the very last of the series, thats if i put them in chronological order.

This is one of my characters, Kisei. He's a dog demon, and a direct descentant of a hell hound that came to the "world" in "the begining of life". He's really powerful.

I know he looks a lot like Sesshomaru from Inuyasha, and that was intentional, tahts just how it happened.

Id like some crits on the look of him, and also maybe some tips on how to draw his armour. Its Japanese Samurai style armour.

His face looks kinds of off, and his hair just kind of disappears into his clothes, but I love the eyes ;D
As for armor, sorry, can't help you there P:

It's very good. The lines just need to be cleaned up and it'll be perfect ^^

very nice

I just Googled japanese samurai armor.
http://www.japanese-armor.com/
They have a lot of pictures and different styles. I hope that helps x3

FLUFFY! *tackles Sesshy-clone*

The face looks a little too narrow, though.

D= And add the cute ears. Sesshy would be a lot better with the fluffy ears.

Very nice! the only thing that concerns me is that his hair seems to be tucked into his clothing, if it were me I would have tucked it behind his ear instead ( inconsequently if he has Sesshomaru's ears it might help to make him look more demonesk if that means anything to you )

Yeah, i see what you guys mean about the hair.

But I don't want him to look any more like Sesshomaru, since he's not.

thanks for the site >3<

Well, I can tell that there are mistakes in proportions, but at the same time, I think that it's your style in drawing so let it be. Rather unque work.
Keep it up.