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Old 12-29-2007, 09:43 PM

*Bad and good critique is appreciated!
I would rather you guys share your honest opinion,
instead of just saying "That picture is so awesome!"
or "That picture sucks... get some drawing lessons".
Give me some reasons or pointers, if possible.*


Pink Seckz

So this took me a couple of days to do, I did it in school during classes. Our school is pretty easy... But I spent like the entire year jacking people's pink markers, pens, pencils, etc. So I had a lot of different pinks, but in the end they kinda look similar. I decided to outline it with a felt Crayola marker(stupid!). The marker bled everywhere, but since I already started, it would look weird if I used a different pen. The most noticeable bleeds that I hated were on the mouth and the rips in his shirt. I also realized I messed up on the dude's belts on his arm.

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Old 12-29-2007, 11:16 PM

It's very nice, except wouldn't his jacket be blowing off of him [if the wind was blowing sideways]? Or is the wind blowing from the back of him, if it is, then the sleeve would be going forward of him, not beside him. Also, the rip on his shirt doesn't look like a rip. His clothes would be flapping a little off of him, so then there would be some folds too. Also, the hands in his pockets look awkward, and some shading would be nice. Other than that, it's good ^^

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Old 12-29-2007, 11:41 PM

It's good just no more lined paper. Lined paper [to a lot of people] is pretty much like wire hangers to mommy dearest. :\ I also agree with what Amiiu said. I love pink ^-^ lol [oh and just grab some printer paper you don't have to go out and buy a sketch book, it's easier to hide printer paper in folders lol]

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Old 12-30-2007, 02:14 AM

HOLY FUCK
Lined paper [to a lot of people] is pretty much like wire hangers to mommy dearest. :\
THIS IS THE BEST THING I'VE EVER HEARD.

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Old 12-30-2007, 02:16 AM

*I'm Satomi*

I don't know what "wire hangers to mommy dearest" means... But umm his right elbow is hooked onto the sleeve, so the jacket would not blow off, that's what I would do in that situation anyways. And I get what you mean about the shirt blowing too, but I kinda wanted the shirt not to be a regular cotton shirt but more like those stretchy tight ones... I don't know what material that's called. That's why some of the rips are ovally, how they kinda should be on that material. I had no idea how to do the pockets, so yeah I guess they are strange. This was suppose to be a doodle, but I guess I drew the whole thing out. I don't normally carry my sketchbook with me, unless it's Tuesday(we need it for class), so I just rip out some line paper from my binder.

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Old 12-30-2007, 02:37 AM

:lol: sorry
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Crawford discovered some of Christina's clothes hanging on wire hangers, instead of higher-quality hangers, and allegedly launched into a tirade that has become known as the infamous "No wire hangers" moment.
But that's what I ment about keeping printer paper with you, it's what I doodle on *shrug*
The jacket makes more sense now ^-^ but the section of his jacket behind his but kind of comes up and goes forward so I'm not sure about that. I like the expression on his face it's like "Yeah I'm a bad ass" or "I hate the wind" either way it's cool.

 


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