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Luna_Lust_Goddess
Broken Hearted fool
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01-12-2008, 04:15 AM
Hey everyone I desired to post this because I've been told it was good...but I think it's not so lets find out how others feel anyway just give me your opinions but be adult about it don't me rude or mean ok thank you.
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Wynna
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01-12-2008, 04:20 AM
Where's your art?
Edit
I see it now. It's good, I can't draw if my life depended on it, and especially not animals. I think it's good. The shading could have been neater, but what the hey.
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Luna_Lust_Goddess
Broken Hearted fool
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01-12-2008, 04:21 AM
Sorry about that..thank you it took me some time to do that..I'm not very good to, unless I take it slow and have a pic to look at, so I can get some what of the details in it. I had to draw that bigger and paint it for art..once I panted it..it was horrible I hated it.
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Arie
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01-12-2008, 04:25 AM
Nice~
I can't do animals myself, but I think your picture is pretty realistic.
The shading could be better though ^_^
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Luna_Lust_Goddess
Broken Hearted fool
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01-12-2008, 04:29 AM
Thank you like I said I was shocked I got it to look like that. I agree my shadeing could be better but this was just the practice drawing for the real project though this turned out better then the completed painting for art.
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Zajikuro
Dead Account Holder
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01-12-2008, 04:38 AM
I really like the tail. :] And I think the background is very good too! Since the colors are totally seperated, it gives it an abstract look. o:
I think the body could have been done better. o.o The hind feet look way shorter than the front feet. XD And then its chest looks to...round and fat? I guess. XD
I hope that wasn't rude. >.< Often when you say "Don't be rude" people tend to just say "Oh it's nice..I really like this part and that part" because they're afraid of being mean by actually pointing out where you need to work on.
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Luna_Lust_Goddess
Broken Hearted fool
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01-12-2008, 04:49 AM
No I don't consider that mean what you said I agree I think I could do better in those parts..but I'm a beginner I'm surprised I even did as good as I did on it.
I had rude people before and they would really use words like oh this sucks or something like that...it was pome though and it was for my bf the people actually said that if I was him I'd leave you and stuff like that.
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Amiiu
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01-12-2008, 11:07 PM
I like how the tail was done, but the paws seem a bit strange. It's like, it's on it's tip toes or something, the legs would slightly bend so that the paws are flat on the ground. Also, the dark part in the middle of the back seems a big awkward. Another thing is, the back legs are all shaped, yet the front legs are just straight. And two more things is that, like others said, the shading could have some improvement, and the coloring can be more even, as in, in some parts, your coloring it left to right, or right to left. And at other parts, your coloring it up and down, and it's noticeable.
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Luna_Lust_Goddess
Broken Hearted fool
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01-13-2008, 01:29 AM
Thank you for the tips on how to improve it..It helps out a lot. I am always up to learning new ways to improve my art or new ways to do art..I love art be it drawing, painting, music, video, sculpting whatever it is I love it.
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kimu
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01-13-2008, 03:43 AM
I think it is really good, but it somewhat looks unporpotional. I think there should also a lil bit more visible fuziness [ outlined fur/hair instead of outlining in shapes ] The tale is awesome too by the way! x3 I wish I could grab it by its tail, although it would probably bite my face in the process *sigh*
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Kitty22
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01-13-2008, 11:01 AM
I like the drawing. Better then I can do. ^^; All i can draw in anime girls and inuyasha in a way but never animals.
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Luna_Lust_Goddess
Broken Hearted fool
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01-13-2008, 05:55 PM
I love anime and thats my best area too mostly chibi though this one I did for art class
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