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Alicia 01-24-2008 08:45 AM

Art for your ripping apart. ^_^
 
http://aphelps.deviantart.com/art/Mene-Aria-75452749

OR, a small version:
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6216/ariasmallwe4.jpg

Crits please, kthxloveyou. <3


(I know her boobs are huge. And I love them that way. OKAY? xD)

Penny 01-24-2008 09:41 AM

Mad props for your mad skills. <3

Huzzah for abnormally normal body types. She looks like she could actually exist and not fall over. She's got the legs and torso to hold up that kind of bosom. ^^
And I love the sideways look.
I'm a sucker for pictures capturing quick glances.

The only thing I can really see is that her head is too small.
Her face is... about the size of a single breast. Or knee cap. ^^

I don't think I need to tell you how big it needs to be, you've got your anatomy pretty much down from the looks of it.

Arie 01-24-2008 10:54 AM

She looks like a super pretty superwoman of some sort xD
Lovely art, I quite love the hearts and colors~
This is art to die for! XD

mai 01-24-2008 12:09 PM

that's very lovely detailed work. but if I may suggest a bit, maybe add some reflected light? it should helps refine the form a bit more and bring character out from the background. and I notice (our) left side of the chair isn't fully done?

Alicia 01-24-2008 12:25 PM

xD It's SUPPOSED to be a match stick, as she's a really tiny person... but I'm noticing the match part looks too pink and blends in.

xDD The huge legs thing is actually something I do all the time... my fault for liking chubby girls, deciding I made the character too fat... and slimming the waist down. I guess you can call it a style thing?


Thank you for the compliments!

mai 01-24-2008 12:31 PM

ooh. I'm sorry then, didn't know it's supposed to be a match stick :D;; anatomy wise, I think she looks good like that already.

Tiga_Claw 01-24-2008 01:12 PM

The only thing I can see wrong is the lack of highlights. Don't go overboard with them, but it really adds depth and expression to a picture.

PlusCandy 01-24-2008 07:15 PM

wow lovely job on the pose~ i adore how you did her shoes too~:D its wicked~

Penny 01-25-2008 01:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tiga_Claw
The only thing I can see wrong is the lack of highlights. Don't go overboard with them, but it really adds depth and expression to a picture.

I think the highlights are good, but deepening some shadows might make them pop a little more. I guess it's personal preference, going lighter vs. going darker.

Yeah, those shoes really are wicked.

Alicia 01-25-2008 02:44 AM

Shoes are Yumehayla's design. <3

I was so dreading drawing them, but they came out pretty well.

Thank you everyone. <3

JiJi 01-25-2008 10:58 PM

thats awesome. I think its nice work. I think her head might be a tad (and i mean a "tad") on the small side, but its not that noticeable so its not enough to make this a bad picture.

Penny 01-25-2008 11:56 PM

I'd say it's quite a bit more than a tad.
Still doesn't make it bad of course.


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