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Old 01-28-2008, 04:15 AM

I got a Wacom intuos for Christmas and I've been having much difficulty as far as adjusting to it but I feel like I've finally gotten the hang of it. So I decided to do a painting of a new OC whom hasn't been named yet ^^;; So as I've been working on it I thought maybe when I'm done I should add it to my portfolio for college admissions. Yes, no, maybe?

Face @ 100%
Full @30%

It's kind of early in the game to decide just yet but some critique would be nice :3 This is only about my 4th painting so be gentle ^^;; Any other thoughts and advice would be awesome...and yes I plan to give him arms eventually XD

One thing I've noticed is that I should probably add more shadow to the upper bridge of his nose.... *runs off to do that*

Edit:
Adjusted mouth and nose

Bleach blonde edit better or worse?
I know if I decide to go with bleach blonde that it'll need some darker bits in the part.

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Old 01-28-2008, 04:24 AM

aawnn.intuos../envys
anyways..cough

its a pretty style for a boy u got there[ i assum its a guy right?XD]
the nose is very well done and well painted overall

the face proportion is very much off, but if that is just ur style, i cant say much[ cept the small mouth is kinda..funny?XD]

hm..wtelse..maybe more contrast to add depth..its kinda flat still
keep up eh?^^

edit; wow.just saw.that skull is lovely!!droolss

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Old 01-28-2008, 04:52 AM

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Originally Posted by foggyday
aawnn.intuos../envys
anyways..cough

its a pretty style for a boy u got there[ i assum its a guy right?XD]
the nose is very well done and well painted overall

the face proportion is very much off, but if that is just ur style, i cant say much[ cept the small mouth is kinda..funny?XD]

hm..wtelse..maybe more contrast to add depth..its kinda flat still
keep up eh?^^

edit; wow.just saw.that skull is lovely!!droolss
I adjusted the mouth a bit and I totally see what you mean about that ^^;; Don't why I didn't catch how odd that was XD Gracias ma'am.

Updating with adjustments in a moment 8D

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Old 01-28-2008, 05:57 AM

You've got some skills there. Well done so far.

The big issue I've got is the neck. It's pretty much huge, especially with his tiny chin (stylistic choice?).

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Old 01-28-2008, 06:08 AM

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You've got some skills there. Well done so far.

The big issue I've got is the neck. It's pretty much huge, especially with his tiny chin (stylistic choice?).
Not really XD I just haven't gotten that far to work on it. I have a bad habit of working one part until it's almost finished and completely neglecting the rest.

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Old 01-28-2008, 07:19 AM

Ah I see. Alright then I take it back. ^^
I can relate, I'm only just starting to shake that habit.

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Old 01-28-2008, 11:05 PM

I like the bleach blonde hair better in my opinion. It is definitely going to be a really good one once you are done. The freckles are uber cute, too. A nice touch.

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Old 01-28-2008, 11:09 PM

Very nice. It's going to look amazing once you're done.

Personally, I like the bleach blonde better. And I don't know if this was intentional, but the whites of the eyes look very much the same shade as the skin, so I'd make them more gray/white if I were you.

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Old 01-28-2008, 11:27 PM

Wow, that's amazing coloring on the face. <3 It looks great so far. :]]
But for some reason, the eyes look kind of small to me.. maybe that's just the way you draw. xD
Well, have fun with your intuos! -wants one- xDD Can't wait to see the final piece. x3

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Old 01-29-2008, 11:23 PM

bleach bleach =) it looks lot better now

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Old 01-29-2008, 11:28 PM

Very nice.
The skull, freckles, and facial coloring are my favorite parts.

I agree with what Penny said about the neck/chin.

I prefer the darker hair personally, but I'm sure that the bleach blonde will look awesome when you add the darker pieces.
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