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Old 04-15-2008, 10:03 PM



I did this like, last month, and I just wanna know what people think of it, if you think that there's anything I can do to make it better (besides adding a mouth, no matter how I tried I just couldn't be bothered to draw that little detail on...), so on and so forth.
And, I don't know if we have to put this here, so I will just in case...
Ginko-sama doesn't belong to me, as much as I may wish that he did.

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Old 04-16-2008, 03:58 AM

Homigawd, I THOUGHT ONLY I LIKED MUSHI-SHI. *high fives*

Where's his mouth, though? o-o

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Old 04-16-2008, 04:41 AM

8D
GINKO.
Lovely art and textures,
But maybe instead of trying to add a mouth,
Give more shape to the head?
It seems rather flat,
SO then the mouth is sort of implied?
I dunno.

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Old 04-17-2008, 09:20 PM

Heh heh, yeah the mouth is sorta just, well, we know he has one so that's what matters right? No, what happened was this was a project for school, and I didn't get the mouth done before I had to turn it in, and I just haven't worked on it since then... I'm incredibly lazy. And when I did try to put it on, it just wouldn't work out right, didn't look normal.
I think that I really need to add on some shading though, in and around the hair line,and the eye, and fix up the hair if and when I get a chance. And the tree, the tree bugs me.

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Old 04-17-2008, 09:48 PM

I think it is really good. I don't know too much about digital painting, so I don't wuite know what they are supposed to look like.

But I really like it.

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Old 04-26-2008, 02:24 AM

I like it. A lot. Although it might be nice if he had a mouth, he doesn't really NEED one... right?

It would be nice if the grass was blurred a little or something. Everything has soft, blurry edges except the grass which is really sharp-looking. It makes it look out of place.

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Old 04-26-2008, 07:08 AM

Thats pretty good for a first time. By the way, you wrote "mu" very strangely. Its actually incorrect. It should be writen "む” and the second "shi" should be right next to "師."

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Old 04-26-2008, 11:59 PM

The absence of a mouth doesn't bother me very much... I just suggest that, no matter how tempting it is, to over-use the grass brush.

Over all, though, your blending is lovely, nice work on that.

 


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