
05-09-2008, 05:50 AM
The last part of the title is a bit slanted.
The boy's neck seems too long and thick. And his shoulders seem a bit narrow, but I'm not too sure about that.
The boy's pants could use a few folds, especially the shorter sleeve-thing. o_o What do you call that part of pants anyways? Legs? Sleeves? D8;
And he could use a knee. It could be just me, but one leg seems longer than the other as well.
And the top part of the shoe seems to be sticking up too much.
And a few lines are a little crooked, but I presume that you'll edit that when you ink?
Oh, and his hands seem a little too tense for his position and facial expression.
*shuts up now* XD
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