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Old 05-20-2008, 09:55 PM

Okay so here's the deal. This is my 2nd attempt at pixeling and my first attempt at creating an actual base for me to use on my own. I was wondering if you guys could help me out and tell me anything I might want to fix such as colors I might want to change or maybe something that seems off before I move forward and continue to build off this base... (this is meant for an art I'm doing in the draw the avatar above you thread BTW... wait can you pixel in there? o_o) I just hope that I don't make anyone's eyes bleed! Well here it is...



P.S I will do updates on my progress if anyone wishes it... XD

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Old 05-21-2008, 01:34 AM

I really like the eyes. 83
I'm not so sure about the head shape, but this is only the beginning, so I can't really say much else. XD;

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Old 05-21-2008, 01:38 AM

lol I think it'll look better once I start dressing her up and putting in the hair... XD

Here's one with it a bit more fleshed out...


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Old 05-21-2008, 03:18 AM

I'm not very good with pixel art ^^; but I like what you are doing so far :D

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Old 05-21-2008, 03:24 AM

I'm loving her left hand. 83

Love the little blobs/palette on the side too, hehe. XD

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Old 05-21-2008, 04:33 AM

The only two major things that seem strange to me is the head shape, and the fact that the neck down have a black outline when the face doesn't, but even with those, it looks very good for a second attempt at pixeling! [And on a side note, I think you can pixel people in the Draw the Avatar Above You thread, someone did that for me before]

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Old 05-21-2008, 11:36 AM

Thank you for the comments and as for the black outlining, that is only temporary. I'm going to change it once I find shapes I like. I would also like to say that the reason her forehead is big is because I'm basically setting up this base so that when I pixel with it it's like putting features on a skull. also I do shape my heads a bit strange but it's really just my style and hopefully once she has a full set of hair she won't look like an alien! XD

Okay here is the updated version. I've been staring at this thing for about an hour trying to get the legs right so I can't really judge anything right not so tell what you think of the body...



P.S working on hair and boots so please don't decide too much before seeing the end result. And can you guess who it is?

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Old 05-24-2008, 11:37 AM

Its really cute, I love her eyes. :3

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Old 05-25-2008, 07:46 PM

Thank you! I've never been very good with this kind of thing so it's a big relief to find out it's going over well.

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Old 05-26-2008, 05:20 PM

hm. i think she looks a bit wonky
but i do like her arms (:

these tutorials may help : 1 2 3

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Old 05-26-2008, 09:43 PM

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hm. i think she looks a bit wonky
but i do like her arms (:

these tutorials may help : 1 2 3
heh I've already looked at several tutorials but thank you for giving your thoughts! ^_^

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Old 05-26-2008, 09:59 PM

@MusicPup : oh. no problem (:

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Old 05-27-2008, 06:56 AM

Maybe have her putting more weight on one leg than the other?
Like, not stand so straight and all front-like, I guess? @[email protected]

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Old 05-27-2008, 11:15 AM

that sounds pretty good and I have to change her lage anyway since Nemui changed her avi...^_^

 


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