A lost little girl was walking around the streets of a busy town, and just when she was about to give in to her depression and confusion, a boy approached her, giving her his hand. The girl sat in awe, and thought he was an angel from heaven.

"Do you want to be saved? Then come with me!" cheerfully said the boy as he tugged her away.
But as he tugged her, the world around her became...different, to say. Everything took a different shape, even the ocean and sky that she once used to stare at for hours changed completely.

Before she knew it, she was in Nowhere Town, at the Nowhere Town's Orphanage. She started pondering on if this was heaven or not, but there was only one way to find out of course...

"Come on! We don't have all day!" yelled the boy from a distance as he ran into the tall and mysterious house.

And so the girl and the boy began to spend their days together, although the mystery of the town remained...


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5/15/08 OPENING YAYZ. Finishing up the pages and the cover.

5/29/08 Finished finishing up the cover. Check out the new pages! Sorry I was gone for a while, the internet went out faster than a blink of light!

6/10/08 Well the god of internet came yesterday and put up the internet again, so here is a new cover, although I am still debating about which one to use and what to do with the other one, and I added text to the covers, but it's only so you actually know what's going on for now.

6/12/08 Updated with new trace pages!

6/25/08 Updated with more outlined pages! Check them out : ) Putting up banners, and more characters.

6/26/08 Updated with some sketchies~ Today I shall sketch, tommorow I shall outline! Afterwards, I will have to get back to studying. Hope you will enjoy these few days! Yay new chapter covers : P


6/27/08 Updated with better pages, and I [ basically ] finished the first chapter. [ Margaret is finally doing the text! HOORAY! : D No moar crappy writing from me? Lol. ] Don't expect an update for a week or two, I am going to be mega busy. Bye bye for now!


About-
Name: Anna [ I will probably change it to Alice : ) ]
Nickname: Kimu [ It ain't japanese! ]
Age: 14 [ Just turned 14!~ ]
Whereabouts: The suburbs of Russia!~
Loves: Higurashi [ anime~ ], Lolita, Punk, horror, video games, Fruits and veggies, The simpsons [ cartoons ftw! ] partying and going out, and just having fun.
Hates: Spiders, cockroaches, and mold on meh apples.
Personality: Shy, yet will do anything to make you laugh. I am an extremely understanding person, in my opinion.


Need to add text? Why don't you add it already, it ain't that hard!

The only text I have is extremely plain and ugly. I have a friend who has a lot of awesome texts and such, and and asked her to help me out with this. So I have to ask her to do this at night or days later because I am busy sometimes, and because she lives in America and I live in Russia, our time zones are completely different! [ I just moved from America by the way, I used to hang with her :'D ]

Still in progress? Just what are you progressing there?

I may feel like the page may not look "pro" enough, or that it should have more shade, a touch up, and such. I mak major changes to the page usually though, when it says "still in progress".

How often will you update? You have a lot of free time right?

Not really, I have a lot of other things to do too. I am just doing this to get some critique, and to get the comic book done somehow. I am going to self-publish this, so I hope I get a lot done. I will probably be going on and off with huge updates, to just one page a week or so.

This sounds kind of fun~ Can I help somehow?

If you help me out, you will get credit in the credits part of the comic book : ) It may not be that simple, [ for I don't exactly know how those legal matters work... ] but rest assure that I will get it done for you.

You can help by outling my traces, putting in text, helping with the shade, helping with the backgrounds, or writing up some comedy parts, which would probably help the most. Contact me for more information.




Here are some wallpapers I made for everyone for the heck of it, hope you like them : ) And yes, every chapter cover is a wallpaper.

The robotic nurse.
The Kitteh Witch.


Help - me on improving this manga I am making. Critique too please :'D

Name: Kimu
Age: 15
Height: 5'6
Personality: Brave, Social, Tomboyish, yet Girlish.
Flaws: Has a Short Term Memory, and a horrible sense of style.
Likes: Creating and Writing out stories, and hanging out.
Hates: Being forced to wear Azmaria's clothing, and going to sleep and waking up.
References- [x]


Name: Azmaria
Age: 14
Height: 5'4
Personality: Playful yet reserved, and tends to be a worrywart.
Flaws: Taking things too seriously, worrying too much...
Likes: Anything Lolita related, making cloths and helping out Kimu with her stories.
Hates: Kimu's fashion sence, pants, and idiots.
References- [x]


Name: Lenny
Age: 14
Height: 5'3
Personality: Sarcastic to manly, he switches a lot between personalities, that it's even hard to tell sometimes what he is trying to be.
Flaws: Doing things on his own, and can't accept failure.
Likes: Playing on his guitar and making up songs to Kimu's stories.
Hates: People who give in easily.
References- [x]


Name: Poleena
Age: 16
Weight: Anorexic
Personality: Way too crazy or way too quiet, you can never really tell with her.
Flaws: Keeping control of herself.
Likes: Animals, butterflies and birds.
Hates: Loosing control.
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Name: Lola
Age: 14
Personality: Another worrywart, and usually dumbfounded.
Flaws: Is kind of slow, in most situations. Also she has weak legs P :
Likes: Lolita, and becoming a different person and experiencing new things, even if she doesn't show it.
Hates: People who show off, and math.


Name: Sarah
Age: 17
Personality: Tough and strong.
Flaws: Can be too blunt at times.
Likes: To be elegant, and flowers.
Hates: People who are like Lola or Azmaria [ Anti-worrywarter! ] : D


Name: Rosa
Age: 12
Personality: Afraid and insecure.
Flaws: ...being afraid and insecure! xD
Likes: To make memories and have new experiences.
Hates: Bullies and people who are as insecure and afraid as her.


Name: Roxy
Age: 17
Personality: Easy-going and bubbly, yet responsible when needs to be.
Flaws: Sometimes gets carried away by the flow way too easily.
Likes: To be accepting and understanding, and asking lots of questions.
Hates: Feeling that she may not be able to stand up too much responsibility, or she may do something wrong.


Name: Mellisa
Age: 1 1/2
Personality: Robotic, and mysterious.
Flaws: Being too naive about the world
Likes: Freedom and wanted to be a normal girl
Hates: People who disobey others


Name: Kumi
Personality: She doesn't really have one, but she is a good actor.
Flaws: Not having much care or emotion for things.
Likes: Bittersweet love, and staring at the moon on top of a headlight outside.
Hates: Others who can't act.



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Updated~ I wish I could change the thread title, because I am not really..."still progressing" anymore, thread wise o__o'

So yeah, I need suggestions on how I can improve the pages that are basically done, so far. Any, please? xD