Oekaki: Koi Wa Senso [love is war]
 

Hi Artpost!

It's finished!
Tell me what you think.
First of all I want to let you guys know what my inspiration is:
The song/art work

Here's my oekaki:
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applet used: ChibiPaint
http://senile.nl/data/8/0000090618.png


The line art:
http://senile.nl/data/0/0000090680.png

Wow. I actually think it's awesome and honestly can't see anything that needs improving. I can't wait to see the finished product

Wow

Thank you!

I notice the red line goes under the line art. Maybe make the red line on it's own layer, and put it above the line art?

yeah should've done that, but right now it's already submitted to the oekaki board and I don't want to bug the admins of that site to send it back to me =p
I will keep it in mind for my next drawing though ^^

I think it's really nice. There is nothing wrong that I can see except the red line thing that Some Random Randomness mentioned. Either than that, comepletely amazing!!