This is my most recent sketch. =3 She's supposed to be from Final Fantasy, but I've never played a FF game before, so I really don't know who she is. xD I just saw her picture in an old magazine of mine, and I thought her outfit was pretty, so I drew here. =3

Some parts of the image may look odd to you. That's because I had to try to overlap it with itself since my scanner was too small to fit the whole peice of paper onto it. xD I had to scan it twice, at different areas; I tried to matched them up as best I could. I'm currently inking it in right now using Gimp. =3

Tell me what you think about it?

http://linkfreak131.deviantart.com/a...ketch-90285073

Wow! It's really cool, I've never played FF before either. But still, that's a good sketch. ^^

wow! she looks fabulous! I haven't played final fantasy either. >.> So I have no idea who she is but it looks good. XD

Frans a very complex character design, but I think you pulled her off pretty well especially with all the details of her outfit. :3 I certainly recognized her as soon as I saw it.

I finished the line art =3:

http://linkfreak131.deviantart.com/a...e-Art-90465591

Very nice. ^^ The thinner lines only for her skin look a little funny since the top she wears almost looks like her skin when it isn't colored yet still has thick lines, but that's more of my eyes being dumb. XD

Yeah, I agree. I can't wait to see what it's like in color since I've never seen her character before n all. But still, the line art is really good.

She looks a little stiff but other than that it's really very good. ^_^

:9
Mmm very detailed.
Proportion wise,
I think her legs need to be a tad longer,
and her feet bigger.

Wow, I'm really impressed by the love you put into faithfully reproducing her outfit... Many fanartists (myself included) will fudge it, or just put her in different clothes entirely. I love the bow you gave her, too-- very organic, and fitting for her character.

I like how her face turned out in the lineart. Since her shoulders are slanted, though, her left arm should probably be longer.

Wowzers.
Most fan-art I see for Fran is a little dodgy, they stuff up her outfit or hair or bow, just the little things which can put off the entire picture.

You, however, have done a brilliant job!
With both the sketch and the line-art.
A pleasure looking upon them.
^3^

i agree on she looks a little stiff but i think it. it's easier to see her on the line art. you did a great job tho.