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Morbid 07-02-2008 03:04 AM

Critique my art? (Most traditional)
 
Rip me to shreds if you please. (Note: I'm only 13 so, yeah, I haven't had much expierence. >>; [oh what a great excuse too])
http://shikai898.deviantart.com/art/Hana-86575244
Hana- an original character of mine.
http://shikai898.deviantart.com/art/...tuary-86578388
Moonlily- Sara's (Gabrielle) servant by order from Sevorathorte who becomes Sara's close friend. From 'Angel Sanctuary'.
http://shikai898.deviantart.com/art/...edone-89128393
Tobi gives Sasori and Deidara a lecture- God, I had fun drawing this. I was reading 'Raising Deidara' and the author wanted to know if someone would do something like this so, here it is.
http://shikai898.deviantart.com/art/Miku-88528512
Miku- An original character of mine I did sometime around 4am or 5am.
http://shikai898.deviantart.com/art/...s-Chi-87410639
Chobits- Here's an attempt of mine using MangaStudio to do Chi from Chobits.

Akuma_Wolf94 07-02-2008 03:25 AM

Your art isn't bad at all, it's actually pretty good. Why'd anyone want to rip you to shreds, hun? I draw kinda like that at times too. I like it, the more you practice the many more ways you'll learn to draw. Something like that. ^^

Reinel 07-02-2008 12:19 PM

You're really good for a thirteen-year-old! Your faces are all in good proportion, which I had trouble with when I was fourteen. xD Keep it up! :D

fuyumi_saito 07-02-2008 02:44 PM

It's very good. you're bound to get better, O_O' like.. I'm 18, and you'll probably be way better than me at 18, I can tell. I didn't start drawing seriously till these past two years, so.yeah..

Just keep drawing, and you'll naturally get better. look at art you love for references, and such.. like bodies and etc. recently that's the only way I got better at drawing bodies, was by looking at other's art(didn't like the art but it still helped) and sketching with one of my friends. so..all you can do is practice. I wish you the best of luck, you'll be great ^^

MoodyBats 07-06-2008 08:59 PM

i think they are pretty good for a thirteen year old. i am also thirteen and your bodies on your art are way better than mine my bodies are not good.i haven't put my art up yet because im not done and im afraid people will steel it :( but still keep up the good work :)


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