07-05-2008, 05:35 AM
Ah, so pretty! * w* Well done.
Just a few things that I've noticed, but I know it's still a work in progress, so I apologize if I'm just saying things you already know > _<
The shadow at the jaw line should be more blended in, and should be a tad thicker. Remember your gradients and grey scales where the shadows at the jaw should gradually get light/darker, so there isn't a definite line. But that might just be your scanner picking up only the dark lines.
For her hair line that runs through, you could probably work more detail into it. Notice how there's still hair in the line, and they don't just stop raggedly. Er...I hope I made sense. x _x And there's some parts in the hair that are darker, like the swoopy hair part by the ear. The dark shadow it creates should be shaded in more so you get a better sense of depth.
Sorry if I didn't make much sense. x ___x' It's late and I haven't eaten dinner yet. If you need help understanding that better, I could make a diagram or somethin'.
Last edited by Kieran Haines; 07-05-2008 at 05:38 AM..
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