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MenewshaMan666 03-29-2009 09:37 PM

Ghost Stories?
 
Im not the greatest writer ever but I absolutley love ghost stories.Since this is a liturature room I would presume that somebody in hear knows how to write lol So if anybody could show case thier ability as a writer I would really LOVE a ghost story...thank you ^.^ Much obliged! ^.^

acenaspheru 03-30-2009 09:32 PM

how's this?

Light bulb

Quote:

Originally Posted by acenaspheru
With a bright blue flash and a loud pop the light burned out.

Nothing new.

How many times had it done that in her twenty-six years of life?

Too many to remember; it was an unimportant event in and of its self.

It was dark in the room now.

Only a small trace of light from under the door penetrated the cool darkness.

With the light now gone, the temperature dropped a few degrees.

Or maybe that was just her imagination.

Slowly she rose from her bed and opened the door.

Out in the hall the light overhead shone brightly and cast enough light into her room that she could see.

This time it had not just burned out, but had cracked down the middle.

Though odd, this did not faze her and she continued into the dark kitchen.

Her long hair rushed past shoulders as she leaned down to open the bottom drawer where the spare bulbs were usually stored.

She discovered that she was out of luck.

Someone had forgotten to buy more.

No big deal, she had plenty of candles.

It was a Friday night and as such, her roommates were out getting drunk and had left her alone.

She entered the hall and with a bright blue flash and a loud pop, the light burned out.

She turned slowly and headed back to the kitchen to get the matches and some more candles.

However as she turned the switch on, a bright blue flash and a loud pop caught her attention.

Now this was getting ridiculous.

She had just changed that bulb herself the week before.

She was beginning to feel a little unnerved at this point.

Sure three light bulbs could coincidently blow in the same fashion within five minutes of each other, but it was a very odd coincidence.

She pulled her cell phone from her pocket and turned it’s light on to be able to find the matches.

Just as she found them, the battery died.

She was beginning to tremble now and she broke three matches before finally getting one lit.

When she did it blew out immediately.

So she tried another.

This one stayed lit but she wished it hadn’t.

Looming beside her was a purely black mass in the vague shape of a human.

She screamed and dropped the match.

It went out the second it touched the ground.

She grabbed the pack of matches and ran.

She was used to the apartment enough that she found her way easily to her room and slammed the door shut behind her.

She locked it quickly and frantically felt around her desk for the candles.

Finally finding one she lit it and began to feel a little better.

She sat there for a moment in the utter silence and thought about what had just happened.

It had to be a shadow from outside the window.

Many people passed up and down on Friday nights and it was most likely someone who had stopped in front of the window shortly.

Slowly she lit the other candles and spread them out around the room.

She climbed up onto her bed and scooted back up against the walls.

She pulled her legs up to her chest and stared wildly around the room, feeling as though something were going to happen.

Suddenly she heard the shatter of glass in the next room.

Someone had broken in.

As if that wasn’t enough the candles began to blow out one by one.

When only one remained lit she pulled the covers up over her head and closed her eyes tightly.

She screamed as the door was ripped off its hinges and boot falls closed in on her.

She peered out, unable to look away and was frozen as she watched the man raise a knife.

This was the shadow she had seen when she lit the match.

She let out one last piercing scream as he brought it down into her chest.

She screamed as she sat up suddenly.

She looked around the room in a daze.

The light was on and all her candles still sat on her desk.

With a bright blue flash and a loud pop...the light burned out.
(c)carthianacenaspheru 2009

i put it in quotes because i've posted it on several other avi sites.

Lunaiika 04-01-2009 09:49 PM

omigosh- don't get me started with a ghost story. It was what i'm destined to do- so here goes nothing.

They all came to the camp grounds, where they were acres from any real help. All of the campers filed into their huts, and came out a few minutes later in PJs, with pillows, and one of the cabin girls had a tarp.
It was set out around the camp fire, and the campers had sat on their pillows.
They chatted, and laughed, and even melted marshmallows all over the fire.
All of a sudden, there was a wicked breeze that seemed to look like a giant ghost, and it took the whole fire with it. The only thing left giving off any light was the full moon.
One of the girls shrieked and shot over the fire pit and onto another girl's lap, shaking horribly.
"SOMETHING TOUCHED ME!" She screamed, and stared across the fire pit, and the girl under her trying to get up.
"get-off!" She managed, and stood up. "What's wrong with you-"
Then, another horrible breeze came by, and it hit the girl standing. It dragged her across the ground, but not without some screams.
the breeze turned a smokey gray, and then the girl screamed. Dragging her across the ground at wicked speeds, was her father.
She struggled, and then she disappeared.
This was followed by multiple attacks to each of the campers, and the remaining 10 out of 25 at the middle of the night went to their cabins.
But they decided to stay together.

After making it to the main grounds, the parents of the missing kids didn't show up for some reason.
And the same thing had happened, and will happen, to any other campers that go to that same site.
And the camp grounds move, making ti impossible to guess which one's where, because it only happens when people least expect it.

crap that was dry... let me get my ghost story book out...

MenewshaMan666 04-19-2009 05:00 PM

Wow you guys are good ^.^ Wish I could write ghost stories LOL

Lunaiika 04-25-2009 03:50 AM

oh no no no no NO! i don't write ghost stories.. but this is NO WHERE near plagiarism. See, usually i have nightmares every night because i'm solving some SERIOUS problems. So, in addition to the re-occurring dream that adds on and finally, i think, came to an end LAST night.. *glares upwards to mind* i usually have SOME sort of other nightmare. But, at least, to my FRIENDS it's a nightmare.. to me it's kind of cool.
Like one time i was in this pirates of the Caribbean setting- oh my friend can play the theme on his piano!- anyways, i was in that setting, and people were like.. in a war of some sort..
but not like usual.
No rules, no nothing. Just plain out deaths. And i, of course, was hiding up on a rooftop, dodging gun shots and lots of other crap that was shot at me.
Finally, when i was about to die, ironically, my mom woke me up because my alarm didn't go off..
but yeah- i just wait for them to come.. maybe i'll like get some more..

MenewshaMan666 05-06-2009 10:48 PM

Nightmares are pretty cool actually :P I like them, there like horor movies...adn becasue its your sub-concious it has all your REAL fears...it really maeks you scared :P lol

If not sure about anybody here but I think beign scared is my favourite emotion? LOL Im not sure if you can call it that though XD

So has anybody here ever written a story of any sort?

pokadott 07-14-2009 04:39 AM

Its strange how my subconcious is bringing to me new, or undiscovered, fears. For example i had never had fears of heights or being lost but recently i have had nightmares regarding those and they left me with new fears that i didnt know i had. Or maybe i always had those fears but never had an experience like that. lol anyways... I hate fear its the worst emotion for me. I cant stand watching scary movies.. although i enjoy reading and writing scary stories. Its pretty strange lol. but oh well. lol

Goblin Maiden 07-23-2009 06:47 PM

I've written a couple of ghost stories. One's with a malignant ghost, and one's with a friendly ghost. ^__^ They're fun to write.


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