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wR-v-blue 10-11-2009 11:17 PM

The Destiny Kid.........
 
Chapter one: The hard travels




I walked out of the bus and I was wondering where I was. I pick up my phone Press and hold 5. The phone is ringing. "Hello?" said a femine voice. "Hey Kelly, where do we live again?" I asked. "We live on Father and Garments ST. Nick." Kelly said. "Oh thank you.... it's just that...when.... you know....." I said sadly. "Yeah, I know that’s why we invited you to our house. Remember that you know who was close to us." She said trying not to say the word I hated the most. "Yeah I know........Be there......Bye....." I said hanging up.

My name is Nick Knight. A royal family from England that moved here when I was 2.My family died and I am all alone. Gratefully I got the Ronns. They are Very nice. They are the people I go to when I’ home alone.
I walked around to the street Father and Garments St. I looked for a house that was on the right. When I found it I looked at it very closely. it was a 3 story house with nice features. It had their names on it on the front of the house; it also looked like a Mansion. My family had a regular two story house....

As I walked in, I heard the screaming of little kids. They were running round and round. I said, “Hey guys!” The little kids said, “Hello Nick, welcome back to Ronns manor.” They were too polite. I said hey to Kelly’s parents, Went to the butler and said, “Hey Mr. Yun.” “Welcome back! I hope you had a pleasant stay at school today.” He said. “Not so wonderful, Mr. Yun I had to climb the “Royal Rocks” Today. Whew and I can tell you that it wasn’t pretty. 20 feet high and 10 feet wide.” I said really slowly. “Well, Anyways, Mr. Knight, can you go up stairs, Kelly wants to speak to you.” He said. “Okay.” I said.

I walked up the stairs to room 101 B. I opened the door and I said to Kelly, “Hey Kelly, you wanted to talk to me?” I asked. “Yeah, but first I found something about you know who.” She said. “Really you found something about them?” I asked surprising. “Well, they aren’t dead. They left you at the house and moved back to England for some reason. They say that you know who was controlled by Cross.” She said. “What by Cross? He’d never do that unless he wanted to….” I said. “Yes, unless He wanted the money for…. Hector Winston.” Kelly said. “So… he wants hector to be fifthly rich?” I asked. “Yep and then he wants to kill hector, bury him, and then tell the news people that a so called “Thieves” killed him and he gets the money and starts a war with us, The Ronns. Then once he wipes out us he’ll go for you.” She said.

“Why would he want to kill everyone first and then come for me?” I asked. “Well, he is a sneaky guy. Plus he doesn’t even know what he’ll do after.” Kelly said. Why would he want to come to me after he kills them off? Unless he wants me to feel his "Pain" of hatred and how it feels to be a lone with no one to be with that you were close to. He was a lonely guy, he did grow up by himself and he didn’t have anyone.
“Kelly I know why he does want to do this plan he is thinking of what he is going to do.” I said to her. “Why? Did you just have a “Ma-hip” rush?” She said while looking confused. “Yes I just did have one. He was lonely, had hatred and he didn’t have no one to be close to so I am thinking that he wants my family ESPIALLY me to be miserable because I/FAMILY made him move out of the KNIGHT’S HQ.” I said. “Oh so he wants you to be the way he was? To be miserable like him, please he is that stupid?” She said almost smiling. “I guess so.” I said while pulling out of my books and putting it on my bed. “So… are you going to do what I think you’re going to do?” She asked like she was that terrified of my MA-Hip or called MH because ma hip is too weird of a word.

wR-v-blue 10-11-2009 11:30 PM

Chapter two my dream of death...

“Kelly….Kelly….Kelly….” I said very softly. “WE don’t need you anymore!” Someone said. “WE don’t want you; you don’t belong here with us!” A mysterious voice said.
“But….I……thought….you said you…… wanted……me…..” I said softly.

I woke up in sweat, Cold sweat. I was having the dream again. The death dream. It starts out like it sounds like but with a little twist. Kelly Ronns doesn’t like me no more and I’ve been kicked out of the house, and I don’t have anywhere to live and I…..die. I don’t know why I have that dream every single time. I want to forget but it deals with someone or something. That’s why I’ve been keeping my eyes open and I’ve been told to shut them, in my dreams.

“Nick….Nick….NICK!!!” Kelly said waking my Whole body up. “What?” I said sleepily. “You were calling my name this morning and I was scared that you were having that same dream again. That dream is like a curse for you ever since your family died. You know how that makes me feel? That makes me feel like you are no even going to trust me no more. Like you are going to forgot about me and start a new destiny. You know what I’m trying to say.” She said. “Yeah I know Kelly, but that dream is about you forgetting about me and I forgetting about you and……and that someone twists that dream some how. Like the devil is watching over my body, trying to wait until I sleep and look through my dreams and take it out and twist it up a few notches and then it makes my night mare dreams Its just to freaking me out like you are Kelly. Now go back to bed I still tired.” I said.


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Srry short chapter

wR-v-blue 10-12-2009 02:29 PM

Chapter three: The Enemy that was....(THis chapter is about the enemy's plot to destroy)

"I can't wait to kill them!!!" Said the mysterious masculine voice. Well, don't push it, bub." Said a femine voice. "I still want my money to help, ya. Master Cross." She said. "Yes, I know Brunnett Vack." Cross said like it was ment to be a love line. "So what shall we do about the kid?" She asked wisely. "Don't make me say it again." Cross said. "Well, I forgot." She said trying to trance him. "Okay fine. Just because you are so cute, I will tell you." He said. "So tell me.." She said. "I will i just...Oh, okay. The kid nick Knight is a royal pain in the butt he is the last of his kind on the united states of america, but his parents and his brothers and his sisters are here in the cellar." Cross said fast. "I just hope he doesn't find out about it." Brunnett Vack said with a cute voice. "Oh well, don't you ever, EVER, bring it up again. Got it?" Cross Yelled. "Y-yes, M-master C-cross." She said studdering.
They walked out of the corridors and went to the meeting room. "So any news, Minny?' Cross said. "Well, just one HUGE one." Minny said. "What is it?" He asked. "Nick found out from this girl, she's from Ronns and her name is Kellly Ronns. She supposed to be the smartest Ronns Out there. Plus she is the one who can hack everything. She hacked our system about......24 hours ago." Minny said super duper fast. "HOW DARE THEY!?!?!" Cross said mad. Cross lit a flame with his hands and threw it at Minny. Minny washed it out with air and water. "Don't try me, Cross. I am the Head HQ of this place. Plus I can make you a lower account and take Vack here away. Yea you better believe it, dork." She said taunting him. "How dare you Minny!?!?" Cross said. "Una dark flame. Enternal sleep." Minny said pointing at Cross. Cross fell to the ground, asleep. "Your punishment, Cross, you wouldn't of made it this far with out me." Minny said.

wR-v-blue 10-12-2009 03:16 PM

Chapter four: Nick's angel
"Nick...Nick...don't open the door yet. You need to find your...." THe mysterious voice said. "Nick!!!" Kelly said screaming his wacky ear drums out of his ears. "Why did you wake me up? I was about to get the answer to the stuff I needed." Nick said. "Sorry, Nick. But we have a HUGE problem. There is someone looking for you and they are trying to feel your MH Zana" Kelly said very softly. "Hurry up and get dressed we will go find a safe place for you." "No, I don't want too. I got to find this angel. That keeps talking in my dreams. i got to find out what it is. If i don't find out what it is...Then i'll die. That's what the person in the my dream said." I Said. "Let me change and i'll go down and ask him/her what they're doing here okay?" I said. "Sure." Kelly said while leaving the room. I changed and went down stairs and then the man was waiting for me.

"Hello, Nick." He said. "I am not here to hurt you. I am here to tell the angel's saying. Care to move on?" He said. "Yes, but what is your name?" I asked. "My name is Grand Bolt. I am the new Bolt family chooser. Or some call me "Destiny"." He said. "Well, nice to meet you, Destiny." I said. "Well, the angel said that a chosen one shall arrive. From the Knight family. You have HIGH MH Zana and you are very scented. You are the one. Well, lets go on, shall we?" He said. "Yes, please. Go on, Destiny." I said. "Well... Oh yes... The angel also said to give him the scar of the destiny. So he can be part of a Destiny Wolf and a Destiny Kid. Here" He said pulling out the two stones. "Insert this in your head. This'll give you knowledge." He said. I insterted them on my head, they went in and then i felt something new. A New one has arrived.......

Sizzla 10-12-2009 08:23 PM

I have deleted the second thread you made with the same story in it, as you already have posted that here. You will lose the gold you earned from posting it again.

Please do not make multiple threads with the same stories in them. It's considered an abuse of the gold system.

wR-v-blue 10-17-2009 03:38 PM

Chapter five: Nick's Ability
Nick got ready for school after. He always did get ready around 8 am. I went up stairs towards the bedroom and then turn right before i hit the bedroom door. I got my cholthes on and then i went tio the school bus. Kelly was waiting for me by the bus station. "Kelly? Why do you always arrive here first?" I asked. I've been wondering about it for a while. " Well, to protect you first of all..... You know you're wanted now so i have to come here first. You get it don't you?" She said. I've always wondered why she came but today...TOday....TODAY I get it. "Oh....Thank you for the help. I don't wanna have to be so speacial every single day. I just wish i could have a speacial wish. To wish for peace with myself. Then i probably be very happy..........(Going to post part 2 of it later)

wR-v-blue 10-17-2009 06:51 PM

chapter five: Nick's Ability Part 2
 
As Nick went to school that morning on May 5th, 2009 he had forgotten somthing. And that something was The gaurdian angel. He's the one who had blessed him with this strange day to find something. "I began to follow the Little thread home...." Said the teacher. Nick raised his hand. "Yes Nick?" Mr.Voltank said. "Well if little thread is leading Hom home then how does the theif attack?" I asked. "Well, Thats a good question.... Well i dunno the person who wrote this book thought of it....PROBABLY a thievery thing. You know what i'm trying to say right, Nick?" Mr.Voltank said. "Yes, Mr.voltank I understand what you're saying." I said.

Mr.Voltank read and read. It felt like forever. Stuck in a big icecube and you're stuck to be there until you're, of course, unfrozen. AS 5th hour came we all went to lunch. That was the best time to talk to Kelly. I know she know whats happen to me. She'll probably tell me to go eat first. So i walked to the cafe area and grabbed a apple, milk, salad, and some chicken. I paid for it all. I walked to Kelly who was waiting for me as usual. "Hi, Kelly" I said. "Hey Nick. How was your school day so far?" She asked me like all the other times. "Great as usual." I said. "Umm....There is something i have to tell you." I said.

"Yep, whats up?" she asked. "Well, i've been experiencing weird things lately. Like when my 4th hour teacher read aloud "The little ways" i began to think of it as a Murderer book coming to life." I said. "Well, thats just weird. Maybe your Going into the magic state of thinking." She said. She'd already gone through it because she already has her powers. She gotten her powers when she was five. She is a wizz so yup. "Well, i think you're gonna get your powers when we hit home. It usually happens-" She said being knocked out of the sentence. My arm just moved and it was in the air and then i said weirdly,
"iron bullet." And a iron bullet flew and hit Madran Sunk.


Madran Sunk. The bully of Bullies. he's the creepiest man ever on the face of the earth. "WHo dares shoots at me?" He asks in Rage. My hand was up and he says, "Oh Mr.Knight. You've done this? You're dead MEAT!" He said. I still had my hand up and i said, "Curse them all, BRONOS! Angel of metals." And a peice of a sword formed in my hands. It was so awesome. It had the color of gray and black. It was an angel. "Bully, Ryanosin (Yun)" Madran said. "Bring it!!!" I walked up to him and said, "Turn him silver, Ye!" And A blast of silver came and knocked him, making him fly out of the stance he was in. *wow* all the kids said. *Madran....Madran was knocked off his feet* They said. "blow gold on him, Yu!" I said, a gold whip wrapped around him. As I sat down school announcement rang in, "School is Canceled."

wR-v-blue 10-18-2009 05:21 PM

Chapter six: Why?
 
Chapter 6: No one belives me... or do they?

Why was school closed today? As I walked out of the school grounds a teacher told me to stop and that he wanted to talk to me. "Yea, sure. What's up?" I said. "What's up? Well, that you've found your powers is one thing but how are we going to train you under these school grounds now? You've almost killed a student, by the way is very amusing, but you have to controll it some how Nick. How 'bout we train you in the Cal?" He asked. "sure, but what's this Cal?" I Asked. "The Cal is the Underground place where we take really "Gifted" People to. So that you don't harm anyone in your training days at Ridgeway High for the Gifted" He said. "Oh, Thanks Mr.VolTank. But....Earlier in your class I had the words flying all over my face and i could see that the story it would end peacefully." I said. "Oh,well it does end peacefully." Mr.Voltank said. "Oh well, better get to my bus before it leaves." I said. *honk Honk* I ran to the bus really fast and found a seat by Kelly.

"So what happen back there was the start of your powers? wow, that is very weird. I've never saw someone who could weild the Angels of metal sword that is like the impossible thing to do though. Well we know how can weild the all mighty sword." Kelly Said. "Yep, plus I just got done talking to Mr.VolTank. He wanted me to go to the "Cal". Its an underground place where they train very very "Gifted" People like me. He asked me very kindly too. Which would of been him but I got a bad feeling that this is not gonna be my day." I said. "That's what you said last time Nick." Kelly said laughing. :heart:. She always acted like she loved me just like a brother which she does not have one of course. Her family was an adpoting comany who took kids that didn't have families. Its kind of hard. "Foster" Homes is what they call it but here the Ronns call it the "Great Omega" care.




Part two is gonna come later!!!

wR-v-blue 10-23-2009 09:37 PM

On the other hand the evils were thinking of a way to destroy the Knight family when they felt the power of Nick Knight. "Was that the power of Nick Knight?" Cross Asked. "Yes master." Harpie lady said. "Well? What power does he have? Come on tell me Harpie!" Cross said impatiently. "Yes, sire." Harpie lady said. While harpie lady ran to the computer to check what Nick's power was when Brunett Vack said, "His powers... Well, he wields the Angel of Metals." "Thank you Brunett. Where's Lady Q?" He said. “Lady Q of the three higher ones is… Well… I don’t know where Lady Q is—“Brunett said being cut off. “Lady Q is here. Mr. Cross of the 10 Vicious. I have come here on your behalf, because you wanted me here and I couldn’t resist.” Lady Q said. “Where’s Mai?” Lady Q said. “I thought she be here an hour ago, Lady Q, but she disappeared off the Chart.” Brunett said. “Oh yes… That rings a bell. Brunett Mai left the chart because someone has killed her.” Lady Q said. “Reincarnated?” Mr. Cross said. “Reincarnated she is. She is the Top Two, above me. She’s now called Lady Zap.” Lady Q said. Who Dares say my name out loud? Lady Q you are soo like that. Lady Zap said into the evil minds. Yes I know. I haven’t even found out where your old body is. Lady Q said in her mind. Carry on then, Lady Q. Oh and bring Jagger with you. Lady Zap said. Yes my Highness. Lady Q said walking off.

*I hope you had a Good week! Sorry for the long wait though, School.

wR-v-blue 10-24-2009 02:37 PM

Chapter 8: the invasion of privacy....
 
Chapter 8: Invasion of privacy
Remember how I usually get up for school? Well, i did that but the bus wouldn't let me on the bus. The bus driver said something like this: "No you can't go on this bus because of the "Cal"" And I didn't get him at all. He told me to wait here an hour then sit on the bench after this one hour is up. So I did as i was told and then a bus appeared! It was magically awesome. "Boy, do you know what you've done?" The man asked. "No I didn't but is this the bus to the "Cal"?" I asked. "Yes, hop on boy." The man said. Their were ab out 10 people including me on this bus. "Sit down, boy." The man said. "Yes, sir." I said sitting down. As we road down to the school instead of turning on the Driveway to the school the dude turned on the grass and he said quietly, "mum." And a path appeared! That was amazing. As we all got out he asked me to talk to him for awhile because he needed to tell me something important. "Boy you hold what weapon?" He said. "I hold the Great Angel of Metals." I said. "Go on boy!" He said. "My name is not boy, its Nick Knight!" I said.
"Oh well I JUST.... Wait did you say Knight? Oh My Gods! Thank the moon god Yuna, your majesty i am so sorry." He said. "My...My name is Bus Driver Ryan but call me Ryan, your majesty." He said. "Don't call me your majesty, Ryan and bye!" I said running towards cal.


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