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rouge282 10-27-2009 05:46 PM

Missing children, my unfinished story :3
 
This is the first ever story that i have submitted on-line, iam not the best at writing as i only started so the story isn't the best.
But iam asking if you could read through it and give me feedback be it good or bad.
It can be found here on my devintart
I will give feedback on anyone else's story/poem feel free to PM it me and i read through it :3

Thank you in advance xD


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