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First Chapter.

A made up, it follows our lives but in a made up way true story about my friends and me. Enjoy~~~!!! :D~

Well...It starts out like this....

P.O.V.:Aiyanna , Character: Daisy Location:School house
Action:Starts out thinking.
I hate my stupid class....Stupid x-friend vampire and evil bitch stalker.....whatever she is. Shes been seriously stalking my boyfriend. The hot bear boy.
'Sighs' "This is so boring."
Daisy was sneaking her ipod in her sleeve and listening to it blocking out her teacher.
'humming Hello Seattle' "damn this is boring....."

'whispers to my friend jashin-ist Gin' "Hey when is this damn class over?
"I dont know 5 minutes...."
I started to walk toward my locker when that stalker girl went past me and pushed me. God I hate her. I heard she had drugs and naked pictures of my boyfriend from Gin... I cried when I heard that. I am an 'emo'...I stopped cutting recently. I'm trying to substitute my art as more of a 'better' way to deal with depression now. People think im really good even though i cant help to fathom why. To be frank i do not think im pretty....Well at least that was the case befor i met my grizzly 'smiles' well oh yeah...im a cat spirit girl. I have 2 guardians. 1 was my old friend who was killed by rasicst people who hated emos.... for short his name is Sly. He follows me around along with the devil Sin who is also one of my guardians. Angels pfft really arent supposivly the only ones to be guardians. Yet Sly was saved from hell after he died with my help. Sin was born in Hell. I noticed then after thinking that the stalker was heading toward my boyfriend....

"Hey Luke"
Thank god he looked away...then hes walking over to me.....'silent squeal in brain'
'Luke leans on a locker' "Hey baby" 'Luke kisses me.'
"Hey Baby, how are you" I blush a little.
"Im okay ...has that banshee over there hurt you?"
I nod no. God i loved him.
'Bell rings' I walk to my next class when these boys stop me in my tracks...the demon frog brothers and oger friend.
"Hey hot thang. Whats been up lately?"
...I try to walk away but oger stops me.
"What the hell do you want?" I growl.

"Hey, Hey fiesty we dont want trouble. its just its come to my attention that you've been training and are one of the 100 people in this school over level 100. Is that true?"
"Maybe, Maybe not. What is it to ya?"
"I Don't know its just ....well I want you"
"Huh??"
"If I get to be your boyfriend I'll get the power from you lke your boyfriend will."
"So i dont want you Jordan"
"I thought you would say that so i'll just have to do what i was going to do anyway" Snickers and gestures.
As soon as he did his stupid possy grabbed me from behind and one started to kiss on my neck.
Tries to get away"No! Get off me!"
They all snicker.Jordan walks toward me and kisses me. I try to get away again but they already summond demons to hold me. I start to cry as He is about to....'hurt me' I notice then Sly was not there and i hear teachers. Then a teacher comes out of no where and takes them off of me.

"Are you hurt?" The teacher helps me up and takes me to the bathroom.
"Don't worry we'll take care of them"
I'm still crying....He kissed me...I hated this.I could'nt talk... I just couldn't....

Little did Daisy know Kay video taped the whole thing and sent it to Daisy's boyfriend.
Luke showed up to my house that night. I was upstairs in my bed still crying. At least they didn't go all the way. Sin was in the corner depressed and i think Sly was scared to comfort me. Alex walked in furious. He struck me hard on the face.
"Damn Bitch I HATE YOU" He was crying.
"Ow. What the hell Luke!"
"Why you little" He grabs me with a clawed hand. He only gets this way when mad.
"Luke...Jordan and his possy tried to rape me"
"Lier!"..."You fucking lier!!!" He tightens around my throut.

I cant breath......Hes talking, i cant hear him. Hes........saying...he wants to.... I cant see.....break up!? No i try to talk but i cant. N-.......