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Seven Sins
Lust
My hands caressed his face, my whisper on his ears. His lovely lips against mine, his arms around my back. His eyes closed blissfully, murmuring my name. I want him. Greed He is mine. Always and forever mine. No one else's. Gluttony Not enough, not ever enough. I want more, always more. I want it all. Sloth I will not open my eyes. I do not want to move. For he is gone. Wrath My heart beats fast. My face is flushed. I can’t control my shaking. How dare he? How dare he? How dare he be happy without me? Envy I look around. I see happy couples embracing, kissing. I watch with dead eyes. It was not fair. Pride I was too confident. I believed I could have anything. How wrong I was. My ultimate downfall. Critique please! ^___^ |
Winter, would you consider this a short story or a poem? I'm leaning more toward poem and moving this to the poetry subforum, but let me know where you'd rather have it. :yes:
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