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xXDemeter127Xx 03-08-2010 09:11 PM

My Parody...
 
Me and my friend made a parody of Last Resort by Papa Roach, give me feedback to it...

Cut my wife into pieces
She stole my last poptart
It was Chocolate with Sprinkles
Wouldn't give a f*** if it was blueberry


It was my last poptart


Cut my wife into pieces.
It was my last poptart
Chocolate,
Not Strawberry.
Don't give a f*** if it was blueberry.

Cut this poptart into pieces
I'm on my last poptart, Chocolate no kiddin
Couldn't care less if you want it
Don't you even care That you already had 7

Would it be wrong or would it be right
If I took you out tonight
Chances are That I might

Cutting you down tonight
I'm giving the Warning, Right?

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine

I never thought you would try for it
To have was to late as you emptied the tin
Hurried you stuffed it within
Tendons, or muscles where to begin

It all started with the Toaster
The bitch went and ate the other
Trying to get a poptart from the higher shelf
only finding nothing but crumbs left

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine


Nothing alright
Nothing is Fine
I'm out of Chocolate

I'm out of Chocolate


I'm out of Chocolate

Chocolate

I can't go on letting you live

Cut my wife into pieces
She stole my last poptart
It was Chocolate with Sprinkles
Don't give a f*** if it was blueberry


It was my last poptart


Cut my wife into pieces.
It was my last poptart
Chocolate,
Not Strawberry.
Don't give a f*** if it was blueberry


Would it be wrong or would it be right
If I took you out tonight
Chances are That I might

Cutting you down tonight
I'm giving the Warning, Right?

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine

Nothing alright
Nothing is Fine
I'm out of Chocolate



I Can't Buy More

There are none in the Store

I'm Crying

I CAn't go On Hope they let me Off

Can't go on

With out Breakfast

Nissa 03-08-2010 09:19 PM

Pretty darn good. You should send it to Weird Al.

AgnesGloom 03-08-2010 09:37 PM

LMFAO!!!
My sister would love this.

HappyStarr 03-08-2010 09:40 PM

I second Nissa's comment. That's just hilarious. XD

xXDemeter127Xx 03-08-2010 09:55 PM

nope me and my friend are going to record it and upload it to youtube.!!! <3 it


Little Miss Flip-Flops 03-08-2010 10:07 PM

That. Is. Awesome.
Send me the link when you upload it? :D

xXDemeter127Xx 03-08-2010 10:18 PM

k, but ive got to see if she can come over first... <3

xScarlette 03-08-2010 10:25 PM

Lmao! noooo not the poptart!!. must buy more now.

xXDemeter127Xx 03-08-2010 10:27 PM

@Scarlette, there are none in the stores... :'(

dieyousucker 03-09-2010 03:00 AM

wow!

Captain Howdy 03-09-2010 06:25 AM

Since you are asking for feedback, I believe the Lit Spot Forum may be the better place for this. I'll just move it along.

mau5ie 03-09-2010 07:07 PM

ahahahaha. this is great! ^^
very nice job.

ZeGuMmIBeaRQueEn 03-29-2010 04:39 AM

LMFAO!! XD This is great! Wow, i do stuff like this all the time, i love it!

Ooh, you've gotta send me a link when you upload it! <3 <3


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