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Jymphoni
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05-15-2010, 04:16 PM
It's Jymmy again!
Looking for help, again!
So I got really bored in class one day and had a great story idea. Sad thing is, I forgot most of it.
Of course, I wrote some down. I'm going to put it all right here, in the next post. (I feel putting it all into one post would just take up too much space, like page stretching. And I'll edit that with anything I add.)
And in the post after that, I'll put character descriptions, and after that, any of your ideas (and credit it to your name tag). If you want to add to the story, you do -not- have to continue where I left off. If you have an idea, just post it, I'll probably find a good place to put it in the end.
When I'm all finished the story, I'll post it in my blog, and add a link!
Edit's will be dated in the title if you're following this.
1: Introduction
2: Character Descriptions
3: Story So Far
4: Your Ideas
[[Future Link to Story]]
Last edited by Jymphoni; 05-15-2010 at 04:33 PM..
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05-15-2010, 04:24 PM
Look! It's the Character Description post.
(Yeah, you can add a character too.)
Lrysa - 5'2" 180lbs. Golden blonde hair that goes to the small of her back. Grey-blue eyes that always sparkle. Twin sister named Andrea. 16 years old.
Andrea - 5'3" 95lbs. Naturally "bottle blonde" hair, dyed black and blue. Goes to her shoulders. Blue-grey eyes that always seem cold and hateful.
Jymphoni - 5'6" 117lbs. Naturally pale blonde, almost white hair, dyed deep green. Sapphire blue eyes, usually hidden behind emerald green contacts. Tries to be like Miku Hatsune. (Orphan) 17 years old.
Gabe - 5'8" 130lbs Naturally pale blonde hair, ghostly pale skin. Milky blue eyes that seem to look into your soul. A voice like dark chocolate. Always wears spikes but light colors. 20 years old.
1: Introduction
2: Character Descriptions
3: Story So Far
4: Your Ideas
Last edited by Jymphoni; 05-15-2010 at 04:28 PM..
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05-15-2010, 04:28 PM
Alright. Here's what I got so far.
It might be a lot of writing, but it's a fast read.
This is not written as it would be in the "finish product", and it is not written in jot note form.
Gabe is the lost older brother of the orphan Jymphoni.
Jymphoni is a lost Goddess, stolen from her parents at birth, and then later abandoned outside Second Chance Orphanage.
Lyrsa and Andrea are twin sisters who are protectors of the Goddess Jymphoni. Born and reborn as Jymphoni is too. After Jymphoni was kidnapped Lyrsa and Jymphoni loss their memory of the Gods and their job, because the one they are to protect has no idea of her true identity, nor do the ones she is to be protected against.
The story starts with 3-year-old Gabe and his parents looking through a window to a room of newborns, pointing at their new family member, Jymphoni. After they leave the window, an unknown person switches Jymphoni with another family’s child. This other baby later goes home with Gabe and his family. The family is unaware of the change until the babies first birthday, the day Jymphoni should have developed some of her Godly powers. At this point in time Lrysa and Andrea currently under different names, are stripped of their memory, power, and job and reborn into a new, normal family. Jymphoni, Lrysa, and Andrea are unaware of who they are, or their jobs for several years. The real Jymphoni grows up in a small family, just her and her “mother”. Her name is Mandy, or Amanda. The mother works as a sales lady for Avon, and never has to leave her house, this was a great thing for both her and Mandy, come March 23rd. This is Mandy’s real first birthday, the day she gets her first power. This power, that all God’s and Goddess’s get when they turn one, is a very obvious one. Her mother woke up early and found a small Amanda baby floating in her crib. She didn’t believe her eyes and left the room for a minute, but when she returned, Amanda was still floating, maybe even flying now, higher than before, and soon, all around the house. Her mother was horrified. She couldn’t stand this child. Surely she was the devil’s own. Quickly she wraps the young baby in a blanket, and leaves her outside the Second Chance Orphanage. Mandy grows up in this orphanage and by age three she knows it’s best to spend March 23rd away from others. By the time she was adopted at age five, she could fly, move objects with her mind, turn things invisible, turn herself invisible, and talk to animals. She never used these powers if she could help it. Perhaps with this family it was for the best. They knew from her pale skin and inability to tan, even a little, that she was not normal, and didn’t like it, or her. But she had a roof over her head and food and clothes, so she did not complain, not even once. Mandy’s first year of school started that September, there she had more fun with her powers. She made the teachers words on the board disappear, made small animals run around certain kids, and on the playground she would move the empty swings as if someone was on them. By pure chance she was put into the same school as her real brother, Gabe. Gabe was eight years old by this time and had enough experience as a young God to know what was going on. He, however, could not find who was causing it so easy. After the fourth day of “Haunted Swings” Gabe told his parents who suggested looking for someone who smiles when the swings are mentioned, someone who wasn’t scared. It wasn’t until he was ten that he found who it was. Amanda Leon, a grade two at his school.
1: Introduction
2: Character Descriptions
3: Story So Far
4: Your Ideas
Last edited by Jymphoni; 05-15-2010 at 04:32 PM..
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Jymphoni
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05-15-2010, 04:32 PM
Alright.
Here's all the idea's you guys wanted to add.
If there's an [x] at the start, I've used it. Other wise, it will have [ ] before it.
Here's an example.
[ ] Example A - SomepersonwhoIhopedoesn'texist
[x] Example B - SomepersonwhoIhopedoesn'texist
Now here are real ideas.
In violet/lilac.
1: Introduction
2: Character Descriptions
3: Story So Far
4: Your Ideas
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