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Old 08-11-2010, 01:47 AM

Hi, my name is Charley, and I’m a dog. I don’t know where I am, or how I got here. All I can remember is where I’m from. The weather is always cold, but I was always warm with my litter mates, the wind blew almost none stop snow into my white pelt. Mom would always howl just to make sure we were around her. I miss her so. Now I’m here, in the slums. My once snowy white fur is now grey with dirt and grime. My stomach howls every night in hopes that my mom will come to me with food, but she never comes. I’m now alone, no mother, no pack mates. Just me and this dirty world. This hurtful place that doesn’t save my heart just hardens my soul.

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Old 08-12-2010, 11:36 PM

Hmmn, it's interesting. Is this only an excerpt or do you plan to continue with it?

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Old 08-16-2010, 08:59 PM

it was just somthing that i thought about. I guess i could try and make it into a story. but i would have to think on it. do you think i should soend sometime on it

 


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