Menewsha Avatar Community - Reaper Princess (Critique wanted gore warning)

Before I start there will be gore and other mature things like that. Nothing overly drastic but death is apart of this story. I have warned you.

A young teenage girl walked through a room made of a special gem that created rainbows on the walls. Pillars were lined in neat rows on either side of her making it seem like a hallway. All that could be heard was the silent knocks of her pitch black heels against the floor which was made of the same type of stone. A black dress with no sleeves and a long skirt that almost reached the floor contrasted brilliantly with her ghostly pale skin. Her light blue hair was very short much like a boys in the back with a long fringe of bangs that covered her right eye and went past her chin. As she walked shadows started to dance along the walls for her, trying to make those beautiful red lips curve into a smile because everyone wanted the smile of the
Princess of the Grim Reapers.

"Don't let him escape!" "Stop Murderer!" "Halt!" That was only three of many things castle guards shouted at a boy who had just murdered their King. His skin was pale though not to an extreme and he seemed lanky by the way he moved his body. He was however lanky by no means. The thin boy dressed in all black jumped onto the wall that led to his freedom but was pushed of by a spear being swung at him. He landed on the ground and swiftly hopped to his feet. He would have to fight the guards and be very careful. None of them were destined to die yet. He held his hand straight to the side and a black pole started to form. Out of one end of this pole a curved crimson blade also formed. A scythe, the weapon of a Grim Reaper. "I would be careful if I were you. You don't want to die do you?" He asked and the look in his eyes was one of insanity. The smile on his face only made him look more insane. "I am Skippio and I am a Grim Reaper. I can't assure you that you'll live through this fight." (More will be added later.)