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A sad romance story~
I hope u like this story, it was for when I was on gaia and my username was [F]allen [A]ngel
~My Story~ Since the dawn of time, I was a celestial being. A Seraphim Angel, I was sworn to fight against evil, and to protect humanity... but always to remain unseen. The pain, and fears of mortals were unknown to me, I had everything I could ever need. Yet something was missing... Duo: I watched over a mortal, Duo a human. I watched over him for months... trying to bring happiness his way, attempting to ease any pain he felt. I was never seen, but I was always there. I found myself thinking about him every moment. I couldn't bear to be away from him, and even more painful was the face that he could never know that I existed. I would lay my head on the side of his bed, just to hear him as he slept. My Fall: My love soon turned to pining, and I decided to take that final step. I was about to give up my immortality and become mortal... to fall. Determined I flew quickly to the forest where Duo was headed, and flew as high as I could... Then I let myself plummet. I awoke bloody and in pain... it was so exquisite! I could actually feel. When I saw myself, I was brought back as a human, just like my love. I was found by Duo, hurt and alone. Immediately he brought me home to take care of me. I was a babe in the woods; I had no idea how to care for my new mortal body. But one night, he never came home. I was very worried, there was nothing I could do but pace and think about what could happen. 'Do I think it was worth it?' you probably wonder. Well, at the time I would have given up everything for just a moment, just a touch. I had a few weeks to spend with him, to be able to touch his skin, smell his hair. |
Romance
I have more ^^
Well...probably way too many but still I hope it's worth reading |
Poem1
A graceful look
A slight glance A wink Are those a sign of love? I've read all the poems and listed my thoughts, But I still can't decide, Do I like him or do I not? I can't make up my mind, Yes?No? The chance may never come again, My heart says yes, but my soul says no, In the end, my feelings shall decide different moods for diffirent types |
Poem2
Why must I
Why must I seem like a fake? The facts are there but are they completely true? It seems as if Everytime I talk to that one person I feel more hallow as if I'm living a lie But how can I stop? If I don't I collapse even more Grasping onto the past I want to despertly to change it |
Poem3
I just don't...
Why do I feel like this I feel so fake.... Not me The person i was before Innocent and Clueless Now I describe that as stupid My friends don't know me anymore I don't even know myself What happened to me? Do I...finally realize my life? |
A glistening hope
Maybe
There's a slight chance A possiblility That it might come true When I think about Us together It makes me smile How far we came Just to be more then friends A glistening Falling star Something that's now resung A golden aura That surrounds hope All possiblilities Maybe? Just maybe there's a chance, waiting for me some where in the world to have my own happy ending. |
Sad
Every Girl
Every Girl Has a dream guy Someone perfectly that matches them Knows the right thing to say Every glance Every touch But they missed a minor flaw There could be a guy out there But is it theirs? A perfect someone That exsists They see 'em But can not have 'em Every day is just a pinning of sadness Even just talking to 'em Gives them a pint of sadness Knowing he will be perfectly happy w. someone else They think Am I just a minor addition to the world? Just added To the formor states of exsistance Made to be jealous One that is devilous To be dead Never to maintain happiness or a place worth living in Wasted in a never ending world Of the dead People caring People dying Is their world of death |
Poems
There are some of them I wrote myself
I hope u like it ^_^ |
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Oooh, BASHING TIME. 8D
Fist off- wrong forum ENTIRELY. In THIS forum, we talk about and discuss books and novels. You want to write fanfiction and short stories? That's another forum entirely. Second of all, you did a major no-no here on Mene- double posting. Jeebus. No posting after yourself. That's highly frowned upon here. And is that copy/pasting of lyrics or someone else's poetry in those double posts? Again, MAJOR no-no. It's considered spam, and is, I believe, a bannable offense. If it's yours, fine. If not- put it in quotes. You know, reading the rules is a GOOD thing. If you want to be retarded, Gaia is THAT WAY. |
@aimutz: A post that contains only an emoticon is considered spam ya know.
@Alegretto: No need to be so rude when you're criticizing someone, it's called flaming. And, if you want to sink down to the level of a first grader, then continue calling people names, it only makes yourself look "retarded". @Dark_Midnight: I liked your first story, kinda reminded me of something you would put as a description in the avi arena. But this is the wrong place, try the writing/literature forum. You can receive better criticizm from other readers better there. |
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how rude! Even if she is wrong, maybe she didn't know better! don't be such a brat! :shock: Show some compassion...
P.S. love the story! It is fascinating, and goes perfectly with the Fallen Angel thing! |
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