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Old 04-13-2007, 05:51 AM

Once apon a time,
there was a little girl named Bunny. she loved eating sweets and candy. All her Friends and family thought this was cute and adorible. She had a protector who was allways with her, his name was Mori. One day while bunny and Mori were having a tea party with some of there friends, Bunny bit into a peice of cake and then screamed. Every one looked at her. Mori went up to look at her. "Whats wrong?" Mori asked. She answered "My tooth Hurts." Bunny started crying. Mori took a look at her tooth and came to a conclusion. "Bunny, you have a cavity." Mori said. Every one gasped. "Mori how could I have a cavtiy? I brushed my teeth every day." said Bunny. Mori said back " I don't know but you are baned from sweets tell you get your tooth fixed." "NOOOOOO!!!!! You can't Do this to me Mori." Yelled Mori took away all the sweets in the house. For 3 days Bunny did not have any sweets. so, she was really mad and growled at any one the past her. but one day Mori took her to the Dentist and the Dentised fixed her tooth. Then Mori took her to the Cake shop and got her lots of cake. THE END!

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Old 04-13-2007, 05:59 AM

Very Simple.
If you fixed the typos, it could be a children's book.
No joke.

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Old 04-13-2007, 08:03 AM

thank you for you coment

 


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