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Trinitydoll 08-23-2007 11:31 PM
what im capable off
 
Hey kiddos I invite everyone to post anthing related to writing in here, can be articles, poetry or short stories just anything that is written hehe
I used to have another thread but i just cant find it sigh so well...her i go =) please coment

Trinitydoll 08-23-2007 11:37 PM
Quote:
We don't see stars at night,
because the street lamps drown them out.
They're just like me,
You can't see me,
My species drowns me out.

You can't see single grains of sand,
on the desert floor.
Just like me, you can't see me,
I don't try any more.

You don't see hemoglobin,
in the smallest drop of blood.
Just like me,
I'm free to bleed,
When you push me into the mud.

Trinitydoll 08-23-2007 11:40 PM
'Half A World Away' and all related works are ©Copyright of 'Neil Edward Crossley'.
All rights reserved.

Quote:
HAlf a world away

On nights where the moon in the sky hangs low
And the stars shine with an iridescent glow,
I need to be in her arms and forever I would stay
But it's impossible; she's half a world away.

Although it hasn't been long since she left me
In my heart I know it feels like an eternity.
I need to know if she still feels the same
Because I do every time she whispers my name.

My life is incomplete without her presence
And the aroma that follows her, one of incense.
And I miss her touch, the softness of her lips
Oh how I long for her embrace and her kiss.

Time is now ticking away until her return
And there is nothing else for which I yearn
But for now, yesterday, tomorrow and today
The one I love is still half a world away.

Trinitydoll 08-23-2007 11:41 PM
Quote:
Halloween night
verse 1:
its Halloween night
watch the vampire bats take flight
but don't worry they wont bite
they're just here because its Halloween night
chorus:
its Halloween night
don't be scared
its Halloween night
the pumpkin king is here(x2)
verse 2:
its Halloween day
watch the kids laugh and play
look at their costumes
the witches on their brooms
watch as the mummies rise from their tombs
watch as everybody awaits their doom
chorus:

verse 3:
its Halloween time
the angels look so sly
maybe its your turn, turn to die
watch as your body floats into the air
watch as nobody seems to care

Trinitydoll 08-23-2007 11:42 PM
.i should have made it clear or post my blog better

Trinitydoll 08-23-2007 11:43 PM
erased =)

SleepingPumpkin 08-23-2007 11:54 PM
Is your fifth post your own work? Or are you posting work you've found online?

Trinitydoll 08-23-2007 11:56 PM
the last one is my own work online =D why? u like it?
oh u mean if i made it for another site? yeah want to see my open blog ? i have it there too

SleepingPumpkin 08-24-2007 12:01 AM
What about the one before the last one?

They're okay but I don't see the need for all the unnecessary characters.

Trinitydoll 08-24-2007 12:32 AM
no I just told a mod that she can erase it i totally forgot about the character thing ihavent been here like in forever >,<


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