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Old 10-13-2007, 09:49 PM

((it's not done yet i just want to see what people think of it before i continue))



One day not too long ago I was walking to my bus stop after a day at work. I’m a nurse in the ER. While I was waiting at the stop I saw a bizarre looking man approaching the stop. He looked very fidgety. He sat down beside me as I waited for the bus. He was carrying a large garbage bag and a laundry sac. He opened the garbage bag as if he was hiding something inside of it.


As soon as he opened it you could smell something with utter most disgust. He pulled out a small flask and took a sip of it. The liquid looked like clear water but what was in that bag the smelled so bad? I took a good long stare at him when he faced me and looked from my shaking hands to my eyes.


His eyes were cold as if he had no soul. The way he stared at me it was almost as if I was a friend he hadn’t seen in years. He turned to me and said “How are you this fine evening?” I smiled nervously at him. “I’m very good, thank you.” He smiled at me. He turned back. The smell was still lingering. I knew that smell anywhere since I am a nurse in the ER, it smelt like rotting human flesh!


My imagination grew. Many thoughts ran through my head. At first I thought he might be a hunter and got an animal that smelt of human. Then a thought He was a murderer but I looked back at his face and thought NO! He’s too nice to be a murderer! So that thought quickly escaped my mind. My thought went back to the hunter theory.

We got on the bus and sat down. My stop was first. I couldn’t stop thinking about the man. He seemed so familiar, but I didn’t know until later that night when I sat down in front of my TV. I turned on the news when all of sudden it said: “Breaking news!! Murderer caught on tape murdering Wife and kids!!” They showed a picture of the man and said “If you see this man go to the authorities right away!!” There was a sudden knock at my door. I jumped then went to open the door. The man was standing right in front of me!! I screamed very loudly. He came rushing at me with a knife of some sort.
“What are you doing? Why are you here?” I said terrified out of my mind.
“I’m here for you” He said with an almost evil grin.
“But why?”
“Because for some reason I am strangely attracted to you”
“But you just killed your wife and kids and anyway I’m getting married.” I said terrified of what he might do.
“Well then if I can’t have you then no one can!” He said as he ran at me with the knife. I screamed and grabbed the butcher knife I kept in the kitchen. I let him charge at me then when he got close I stabbed him in the leg. He felt to the ground in pain.
“There! Now you know what it’s like to get stabbed!” I said very sternly. He then tried to stab me but I dodged just in time. I ran over to get my cell phone. I called the cops; they came rushing to my house. They asked me what had happened and I said “I was at a bus stop waiting for the bus when we started to talk a little bit I didn’t know he was a murderer at the time until I got home and turned on the news. Then I answered my door and he was here. He said he wanted me and I told him the truth that I was getting married then he said if I can’t have you no one can. So he charged at me then I stabbed him as self defense.”
The next day the man was in the hospital that I work. I was supposed to stay away from him, but I just couldn’t. I walked into his room and told him straight up “Sir, you can’t just do stuff like that to get what you want, Now your going to prison for quite some time.”
He sat up slightly. “I know. I was on a killing rampage last night. I really didn’t mean to hurt anybody.”
“I know.”
He then said “umm my name is Michael.”
“My name’s Amy.” I said walking up to him.

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Old 10-28-2007, 02:25 AM

Very strange. Does he have multiple personalties or something. Now I'm curious how it's going to end.

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Old 11-10-2007, 10:20 PM

yeah, i'm also interested! it's very good =D

 


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