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Old 01-30-2008, 04:44 AM

This is one of the songs I've written. I dunno. I feel really stupid and amateurish but I hope you enjoy it.


Through These Years

You were always there for me,

As I was for you,

Many years of jokes and tears,

We have made it through.

Someday I can join you,

In that palace far away,

But as for now, I can still always hear you say.






*Look for me when I am gone,

Look for me in the great beyond.

I can never return,

As you will soon learn,

But I will always be there with you.

Deep inside.

Deep inside of your heart and soul I will abide.

Look for me there.






You stand there before me,

Yet you are not the same.

The real you would be able to see,

All this hidden pain.

The years have stolen you

From me, right out of the blue.

One day you were normal,

And the next you aren't you.

Someday I'll see the one,

That used to tell me "Look for me when I am gone."






* Look for me when I am gone,

Look for me in the great beyond.

I can never return,

As you will soon learn,

But I will always be there with you.

Deep inside.

Deep inside of your heart and soul I will abide.

Look for me there.







The years we've spent,

I remember them all.

It seems just a moment ago,

I was very young and small.

Hastening myself to follow in your footsteps,

And abide by your rules, one and all.

But do you remember them?

Do you remember the time in the hall?

The time when you looked me in the eyes and said,






*Look for me when I am gone,

Look for me in the great beyond.

I can never return,

As you will soon learn,

But I will always be there with you.

Deep inside.

Deep inside of your heart and soul I will abide.

Look for me there.







I'll look for you, though you are gone.

You're forever inside of me,

But life must go on.

"Sit up straight,

Brush your hair,"

You always cared for me.

As I will continue to care for you.

And I swear I will






*Look for you when you are gone,

Look for you in the great beyond.

You can never return,

As I have now have learned,

But you will always be there with me.

Deep inside.

Deep inside of my heart and soul you will abide.

I look for you there.



So...did this song strike any feelings in you? From the lyrics, what do you think it's about? (I'll post what it's about in awhile but I want to see what people THINK it's about first.)

 


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