okay i'm thinking of writhing a story. (inspired by a rp)

The story:

It's about a world that has Muses, little beings that have powers. These muses can fuse with a human and give hem their power, it makes it stronger because of the life energy of humans. But the king has decided to imprison the muses and only give them to the knights that he trained.

One day 2 girls were walking, they didn't know eachother but just were on the wrong spot on the wrong time. Two runaway muses panicked and fused with them and they were taken by someone of the resistance. He was the only human member so far and was surounded by muses he protected. Not to ong after the 'great meeting scene' the guy gets taken by the knights and the 2 girls must learn to control their power in order to save him.

When they arrive at the dungeons everything was a trap adn they get attacked by knights, including one gir's brother. they kill 2 leaving the borther injured but alive, though the sister thinks she's killed him. On the way out of the castle they encounter a girl that has also been taken in by a runaway muse and she joins them. she turns out otbe the kings daughter that wanted to escape the faith of marrying


thats all i have so far the characters are:

Meredith / Evelyn: she's kind and sort of has n air of frailty behind her.

Lyonesse / Arlana: she is strong willed and a bit held back. She's not a very social person and could seem a bit cold. She's the strongest fighter

Aithne / Annwyn: She's kind but a bit paranoia. After she's revealed she'll prove to be majestic and the princess role-model

Kartik: He's Meredith's brother. He is very strong and hates traitors, he even hates his sister to some extend. I'll probably let him turn sides

Gavin / Raine: He's the protector of the muses. He's naturally kind hearted and always worried about the 3

What I need Help With

I need help with suggestions for the story line.

I need help with the characters who have 2 names, please tell me which ones you like best

I need help with suggestions of what their powers may be

please help me i really need it

well, i really like the idea so far!! =D
i recently wen tback to one of my old storys...got a kink ai need to work out >_o

lessee...

for names, i like Evelyn, Arlana, Aithne

for Gavin/Raine, i'd have to know more about his personality o=

as for powers, the muses were originally to help wiht the arts, so you could have them each be interconnected with a different thing that was what one of the original muses was connected with, or just different Fine Arts, Etc
so i would suggest one be a Songmage, one a Artist-Summoner (i know thats nt the righ tname....they draw creatures or things and make them real) one could be a very good alchemist, and hmm....

but make sure to give them powers that you would want them to have o=

thank you^^

Gavin/Raines personality is very protective and deosn't often smile, he's usually all seriousness and he's also really 'won;t let women fight for me' but he adores the muses and would risk his life for them

thats the kind of person i want him to be

though wiht the powers i want Arlana/Lyonesse to have a power that would contain a sword-such because she's a good and merciless fighter though the song one would be good forEvelyn/Meredith and Aithne/Annwyn could have the artistic one

I'll still consider other powers though, because there are just too msuh muses involved with the story, the can't all have fine arts powers and ther are definetly some kickass evil ones involved too

I'm going to move this into the Story/Help Subforum, since you're asking for help.

okay thanks sorry about that ^^

Originally Posted by HotaruHoshi

thank you^^

Gavin/Raines personality is very protective and deosn't often smile, he's usually all seriousness and he's also really 'won;t let women fight for me' but he adores the muses and would risk his life for them

thats the kind of person i want him to be

though wiht the powers i want Arlana/Lyonesse to have a power that would contain a sword-such because she's a good and merciless fighter though the song one would be good forEvelyn/Meredith and Aithne/Annwyn could have the artistic one

I'll still consider other powers though, because there are just too msuh muses involved with the story, the can't all have fine arts powers and ther are definetly some kickass evil ones involved too

no problemos at all o=

hmm, I think i like gavin better than! o=

:3nod: that makes much sense. glad though that some of my ideas were helpful o=

oooh kickbuttevil! o=

wehn you finish typing/writing some of it, i wanna read ! o=

I'm actually thinking of making this my first try for a manga story, it's going to be sooo hard but i;m gonna try it *nods*

ooh! i'm working on a manga too right now!! =O

could you give me some tips maybe, I've never even attempted to make one, but I'm determined:], but yeah I could use some tips :P

I'm prolly not the best person to ask, i've only got 2 pages-half done and the sketch for a third page, and the character sketches done

it doesnt even have a name yet! XP

it's really not too much different from a story, just now with drawing i guess