my storrie,
 

my story this is part one please tell me whats wrong with this.



One day a woman was pregnant she had a son, in this village the priest names there kids at birth, this kid received the name Clay as it means immortal. The father was not to be found, not a trace of him any were like he was never there.his mother died when clay was five. So he had to live with his aunt and uncle. Hes Aunt and uncle weren't very nice people they tend to abuse him just to get there angry out, when he was 11 he couldn’t take no more of this he didn’t want to get hurt no more, so he decided to kill them both and that’s what he did he set fire to the house and made sure there was a explosive in the room so they wouldn’t have time to run. Now as he set fire to the place he started running knowing it would explode and if he doesn’t hurry he will not be one lucky guy. He was running crying, ran to the forest were he felt save. His hands shaking, shivering, tears dropping. He walked in to the village he was born in, he went to the priest as only as he knew him the most. Whats wrung my chilled the priest had asked? My uncle and Aunt just died in a house fire, as I noticed the flames I ran for help watching my house burn in flames. The priest said he would send people out but for now u can stay here. He had stayed there for the night. He ate breakfast with the priest telling the child the bad news about his aunt and uncle didn’t make it. And then he said I would need to send you to the foster home until u find a new place. Every day Clay would run to the forest to be alone, he was mad and decided to take some anger out on a tree so he hit the tree as hard as he could getting his anger out. The tree fell to the ground with a thump. Brian stunned at what had happened, but how.. why.., he fell asleep that night thinking what that…… how did I do that? He had a very strange dream that night, it was just calling out to him, Clay Clay you can do more than just that, over and over until he woke up the sound faded. He thought to him self, what does that mean. How can I do more. Did that dream even mean any thing. He just ignored it, going on with what he did normally, get teased, go to class and be alone. He had a few people go up to him saying hi and how are you, but he just ignored them walking passed but then the week after the dream he had a similar one but this time it was saying “Clay Clay did you even listen to what I told you I said u can do more than you think, believe in your self!” Clay woke up early that morning, he thought about last week and before he had that dream he had hit that tree to the ground. Him walking to the forest telling him self I can do more, I can do more..? he tried hitting a tree again, nothing happened. He got angry at him self for even thinking about the dream… he heard a whisper, believe in your Self not the dream. It had faded away him freaked out he sat down thinking. OK I BELIEVE IN MY SELF, he screamed running to the tree with all his furry and hit it as hard as he could. Bamb to the ground the tree had gone. Him with a smirk on his face. Ok time to try something new. He had climbed up the tree the tallest one there he knew, the veiw was wounder full he could see the whole village were he was. Him not holding back jumping tree to tree with speed. When he was tired he sat on a branch thinking what kind of powers he can relish if he tried, but nothing had come to him not yet. After that day he went to the forest pushing him self, training, getting stronger every day. 2 years had passed he is now 13, he got teased again at the foster home. This time it was the most popular kid of the foster place, him spitting in Clays face calling him a loser a loner laughing at him not having any friends. Clay got pissed and punching him in the face the kid flying back with a bloody face. Every one running to see if the kid was ok, calling Clay a freak. He notice he had got the adults attention, so he ran off to the forest knowing he couldn’t go back. He had walked deep in the forest a hour passed. He never knew the forest was this long to walk trough he wasn’t even half ways out. It was getting late. So he decide to get some sleep. He closed his eyes on the forest ground dosing off falling a sleep. A man was beside Clay, him calling out his name Clay Clay what are you doing here what have you done now? Clay waking up hearing the same voices from his dreams. Clay opened his eyes. Huh who are you, how do you know my name?, I'm Dartus. I'm your father. Him hearing that he quickly sited up. Saying you cant be my father. My father is dead. No im not I had ran off because the village was after me. I had to fake my death in order for them to stop. Clay just starring at him, saying were you talking to me in my sleep?. Dartus looking at him with a smile. Now how about you come with me I will clean you up and get you something to eat. Clay fallowing behind.

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