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Furious 04-09-2008 11:55 PM

James' Original stories! ^-^
 
Welcome. Welcome one and all to my story thread 8D Here I shall be posting original stories I've made. The first one being on two of my original characters. Without further ado, here we go.
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It was a pretty hot day that day. Marina was sitting outside against the wall of the house, eating a popsicle and cursing existance as always. Well, more popsicle and less cursing, but whatever. She leaned further against the wall and stuck the popsicle to her lips and gave it a small lick before sticking it in her mouth, her head bobbing up and down as she savoured the sweet cherry flavour. Just then, the door opened, and Nicole came out. She was wearing a tank top and some shorts. They weren't exactly stylish, but she didn't expect much from Nicole. Though...There was something attractive about the way she looked, on a hot day in little clothing. Wait, Nicole, attractive? The heat must have been getting to her more than she thought.

It took a few moments for Nicole to spot Marina, but when she did, she jogged over. "Oh, hey!" She said cheerfully. How could someone be so cheerful on such a hot day? "What'cha doing?" Marina stared at Nicole for a moment. Wasn't it obvious what she was doing? Those puppy dog eyes demanded an answer. "I'm eating a popsicle." Nicole nodded. "I see. So anyway, I came outside to do some gymnastics. Wanna watch?" Asked Nicole, innocent hope in her voice, and pleading in her eyes. Damn the eyes. They had a special way of making her cave on everything. She shrugged. "Sure, I guess. But I'll be going inside soon, when I finish the popsicle." Nicole beamed. "You'll enjoy it. I'll make sure of it!"

Nicole went a feet away from Marina and did a headstand. For a brief moment, Nicole's stomach was exposed. Marina never realized how skinny Nicole was. Gymnastics really must have helped with that. She blinked a few times and shook her head. What was she doing? That was twice she had found herself doing something extremely un-Marina like. And she had spent years perfecting that Marina image. After a few more gymnastic-y moves, Nicole went back over to Marina and stopped. "Want to see me do a backbend?" She asked, once again looking hopeful in that child-like way.

Marina shrugged as she licked the popsicle again. As Nicole started her backbend, she couldn't help but stare as Marina licked the popsicle. It had started melting long ago, and the juice was dribbling down her fingers and hand. Marina looked up and saw Nicole staring at her. "What?" She asked, sounding irritated. Nicole's mouth went dry as she tried to think of a reply. Suddenly realization hit Marina, and she hid a smirk. "That's a nice backbend, you know," She said as she brought the popsicle to her mouth again. Her tongue flicked out and ran up the length of the frozen treat. Darting up and down before she put her mouth over it and started to suck, Head bobbing up and down.

Nicole's arms and legs began to feel like putty and she felt herself wobble and fall on her bottom. She swallowed, trying to get enough spit in her mouth to say something. "Err, so...Yeah, th-that was my gy-gymnastics...So I hope you en-joyed it." She stuttered. Marina finished the rest of her popsicle and threw the stick aside. She began licking each individual finger. Slowly. Enjoying the reactions from Nicole. "Oh, I enjoyed it perfectly," Said Marina. She stood up and brushed herself off. Nicole still sat on the ground, her eyes on Marina. Shaking her head as if shaking out of a trance. "Thanks," She murmured. "I'll be in my room. You should join me, no one else is home. We could play some...Cards." With that, she headed into the house, leaving Nicole on the ground, staring in her direction. Nicole decided to buy some more popsicles later, but she decided to first take Marina up on that offer. She liked cards.
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No idea what I'll be posting next 8D

Amo_Angelus 04-10-2008 12:12 AM

>_< Please tell me that I'm not being dirty and by playing cards she meant something else? Or Ima have to go shoot myself.

Furious 04-10-2008 12:14 AM

Oh, you dirty, dirty mind!

Just kidding XD Of course she meant something else x3

Amo_Angelus 04-10-2008 12:30 AM

So no shooting self? Phew!

Furious 04-10-2008 12:32 AM

Of course not! XD I just wanted to end in a way that was in character for Marina. It wouldn't have been a good ending if I had her say something like 'Hai cum to my room for smex' XD

So, did you like the story? I soak up praise like a sponge x3

Amo_Angelus 04-10-2008 12:40 AM

*dips you in a bucketful*

It's pretty good. Yeah.

Tommeh 04-19-2008 06:17 PM

Pretty good story. I enjoyed it :)


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