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some writing
I just wrote some random poems and stuff you are welcome to critizise
borderline dead inside I don't mind falling to pieces count me in violent let's begin feeding the sickness how do I simplify dislocate the enemy's on the way full of fear ever clear I'll be here fighting forever curious venomous you'll find me climbing to heaven nevermind turn back time you'll be fine I will get left behind. |
I’ve never known a love like yours
Nor thought it could be true, But every time I kiss your lips I feel what love can do With hair like silk And lips so tender, Each moment with you Makes my heart surrender I couldn’t live, I couldn’t breathe Without you by my side, Never will I let you go, My love will never hide And in my heart you’ll always be From now until forever, No matter what, no matter where We’ll always be together When all the songs are over and all the words been said The sun grows dim across the sky and the world prepares for bed I oft can take a moment now to view the sky above and whisper God a simple prayer to thank him for your love Every time I look at you my heart skips a beat I wonder if you know, my love, that my heart is at your feet I leave it there for you to do whatever that you wish You could take my heart, and love me, Or just leave me in this bliss. |
GoodBye My Angel Dear
My Days Draw Long and Weary When you are no longer near Confidence is filled with questions Strength replaced with fear. The assuredness that I awake with each day is nowhere to be found, As Though my dreams and aspirations were buried underground. I hear your voice being carried by the wind Like your fingers through my hair I close my eyes and remember your kiss And wish that you were there. So with nothing left but one thing to say to resolve my heartbreak here, goodbye my darling and my love goodbye my angel dear. |
w0w trin I had no idea that you were so good! I really enjoyed reading some of those and all I can really say is keep the good work coming. You really seem to have a talent there with your writing and I don't think you should stop. I really enjoyed them because they were a little different, not what I was used to.
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