Disclaimer: I do NOT own Kingdom Hearts or it's characters!
ATTENTION: This is boyxboy. Yaoi, it's called. Don't like? Don't read.
Summary: Saix is given three commands. To Rebel. Kick. And Kiss. Then, if that doesn't work, he's given a drink to make the Superior less... authoritative and more open to Saix's longing feelings. What happens if THAT doesn't work?
Rating: PG-13 [[Until Put on Fanfiction! xD]]
Pairs: XemSai // Zemyx // AkuRoku
Completed?: No, still in progress.

Chapter 1.
The Three Steps

Saix poked around at his food, turning his head up constantly to look up at Vexen.
"Not yet," Vexen would say.
A small sigh escaped Saix's lips, maybe it was for the worse, but Saix really needed to know!
"Saix, can you pass me the bread?" asked Xemnas. Saix nodded and grabbed the bread basket and passed it over. As he did, they touched. Not flesh to flesh, but they touched! It was enough to burn up a blush on Saix's face. He turned away.
"Awuh, Demy, look whose blushing!" said Axel, who was pointing and laughing at the bluenette.
Saix growled at him.
"Saix! What have I told you!?" As soon as he begins to get mad, you must rebel.
"What are you going to do? Spank me if I don't stop growling at Axel?"
"... Excuse me?" Everyone was in awe as they stared up at Saix. They couldn't believe the second-in-command could be so rebellious!
Xemnas still stared at Saix. He was shocked, to say the least. Why would Saix something so vile to his Superior?
Once he's down, kick him. Saix could hear Vexen's words in his head. Rebel. Kick. And KISS. Wait, kiss? Was he sure he was going to go through with this plan?
Yes! No stopping him now.
"So, Xemnas..." said Saix, taking the glass of wine and pouring Xemnas some. "Why don't you have a sip?" Saix got closer to Xemnas, so close he could smell his cologne.
"Saix... why are you acting so weird?"
"Weird? How so?" Saix then wrapped an arm around Xemnas' waist and pulled him in. Everyone was watching them besides Axel and Roxas, which, were making out.
Xemnas swiped Saix's paws off of him, which an angered face. "Saix! Stop this!"
"No, you stop me." he said seductively.
Xemnas growled and Saix purred back in response. Saix, all fired-up, then kissed the Superior's lips not wanting the soon-to-be black eye for a week.

Very cute ^///^ I think you should continue it :O!

I'm a major yaoi Kingdom Hearts fan, and so far, this is very cute. (:

I caught your username and I was like, "LOL, SMALL WORLD." Y' know, because I'm ` R o x a s. 8D

Anyway, love the story, humour was included, and it was very sweet, too. c:

-winces- Ok. Ah. First of all, let's make something clear: constructive criticism is not a bad thing, alright? Sometimes I come out as a lecturer or a bitch, but I really don't mean it, so don't take what I'm about to say as a bad thing, alright?

First of all, a sincere congratulations. I'm really quite relieved that you can type. So many times I've come across fanfiction that looks as if it were written by a two-year old, I'm just insanely happy when I know that a person can actually type.

Anyway, so, yes! There's really nothing wrong with your spelling and soforth. However... Well, I'm something of a characterization nazi, and you unfortunately hit one of my pet peeves when it comes to writing. and within less than a paragraph:

None of the Organization members are girly. In fact, just about all of them are pretty damn manly. Even if one ignores the problem of them not having hearts, I just can't see very many of them blushing and going "oh my gosh! oh my gosh!" over just one little touch. It's not in their personalities, especially Saix's. That sort of view is very feminine, if you'll excuse me. That's not how men think generally.

Another thing is that I'm somewhat confused with what's going on in the story. Is Vexen speaking inside of Saix's head somehow? Is Saix remembering instructions? Or is he just going crazy? And since when has he or Roxas been exibitionists? I'm pretty sure Xemnas andor Vexen would lecture the everloving hell out of anyone who showed such... er, intimate behavior with another person, another member especially, since no hearts is kind of a big peeve with them.

I'm sure I could go into more detail, but I'm trying very hard not to turn my concrits into crazytime rants. ._.; I am honestly trying to help you become a better writer.