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Old 08-02-2008, 02:58 AM

Because I Love You

I push this heart together,
And seal the cracks with glue.
My hands are scratched and sticky.
But it’s okay,
Because I love you.

I wait until it dries,
Then reopen my chest.
I stuff it back inside,
And take more then one last breath.
Nerves tingle as they awaken,
And this grave has split in two.
My chest is cracked,
And bones are broken.
But it’s okay,
Because I love you.

The dirt sky has split before me,
Revealing perfect shades of blue.
My lungs can breath,
At last, fresh air!
My eyes can see it’s you.
My hand is taken inside your,
And I’m guided though the yard.
Sometimes I may stumble.
But it’s okay,
Because I love you.


(Yaaay. Just wrote this poem. More, crappy old ones to come.

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Old 08-02-2008, 03:02 AM

China Heart

Sticks and stones might break my bones
But words will always hurt me.

A fragile china heart
Cracks that show
Where it came apart
Two eyes weeping
Good friend
In the slumber that is death

Red eyes close at the sound
Of a coffin hitting the ground
Eight feet under
Life is cruel to they who wander
Off the path
And into the true wonder

(0.o Lolwot?)

Wait for Me

It's just a trick
It's all a trick
These feelings in my head
They aren't real It's all a lie
I don't want to be by your side
But I can't help this feeling
That bubble up inside
The lids about to open
So just wait
Just wait
For me to pull out what's inside

(DOUBLE lolwot.)

Forgotten Love

Hello,
Can you hear me?
Can you see me now?
Now that you are lost,
Lost from everything you know?

I’ve been waiting for this day,
Ever since you left me.
Telling me I was wrong.
That we had to move on.

But now you’re here again.
Now we can stay in our own little world.
Forever, until everything is right.
Then someone will find us.
Then we will live in the perfect world.
The world that I’ve been waiting for.

What do you mean, you don’t remember?
How can you not remember me?
How can you not remember everything we’ve been through?
This is the thanks I get?
For staying by your side for so long?
All I get,
Is nothing?

You act as if I’m crazy.
As if you’ve never met me.
How dare you,
How dare you betray me?
You promised you would come back to me.
You promised.

If I had eyes they would be weeping.
If I had a heart it would be aching.
If I had hands they would be shaking.
If I had knees I would be on them.
But I do not.
I am just nothing in the air.
Nothing real to hang on to.

You leave me once again.
Though I will not give up.
Not this time.
Not the next time.
Not ever.
I will never leave you.

(Well now, this one just sucks.)

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Old 08-07-2008, 09:15 PM

I liked because I love you
^-^
It's cute.

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Old 08-09-2008, 09:10 PM

I actually like both your poems--though I'm more inclined to favor the first one--Because I love you. It just had a...tone. I liked your wording, it made it interesting and certainly worth reading. You shouldn't be so criticizing when you discus your poems--they're very good.

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Old 09-18-2009, 01:55 AM

Your poems are so good! @[email protected];;

 


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