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Old 09-30-2008, 09:10 AM

I'm always writing...here are a couple just to start out with. Feel free to comment on anything about them. :) I am always open to comments.


Everything and Nothing

fading shadow
longing
aching heart
not yours to hold
yet ment to be
stars aling
metors blocking
fingers barely touching
straining for something
brief
wanting
needing
pain
pleasure
one in the same
nothing
everything
forever

Loveless

gazing star
weeping moon
longing soul
aching heart
fearful mind
lonely tears
loving spirit
fragil hope
broken faith
loveless girl

This next one is a little older, I wrote it in HS but it is always one of my favorites and it was featured in the schools big writting book at the end of my freshman year.

I try, but its never enough

I try,
To be everything I am not
I try to be everything I should, that you thought I could
To be everything that I will never be

I try,
To see everything I couldn’t
I try to see everything you see
Some things just weren’t meant to be
Because it seems
There are things we don’t really want to see

Well I try
That’s all I can do
I try
To get forgiveness from you

But I
Always fail
Turning pail
I don’t blame you
Though in the pain you make me wail

I try
Not to cry, about everything I’ve lost
Try to change, rearrange, try to pay the lost

But I
Always lose
Beat and bruise
Always cause such pain
Try and forget, all that I regret
Burning memories remain

Well I try,
That’s all I can do
I try to get forgiveness from you

But I
Always fail
Turning pail
I don’t blame you
Though you’re the cause of what makes me ail

My problems never seem to go away
You live and you learn that we all have to pay
Pay the price for the deeds we do
No advice to help me,
Help me get through

Well I try
That’s all I can do
I try
To make it up to you

But I
Always fail
Turning pail
What I’ve done, I can’t undo
Cannot undo the pain for you

I cannot run
From what I’ve done
I have to pay the price
Have to learn, or I burn, going up in flame

A flame that makes smoke
That will choke
Everything I have left to claim

Well I try
That’s all I can do
I try
Want to fly
Up into the sky

But I
Always fail
Turning pail
My sins won’t let me exhale

Well I try
But I guess I don’t try enough
For you

But I don’t see another damn thing I can do
So I guess I’ll try again
To make up for every sin
But I know its not enough
Oh no, it’ll never be enough

It’s not enough
It’s not enough that I try
It’s not enough
Would it be enough if I die?

It’s not enough
Not enough
Not enough
Never ever

Last edited by Bella Rose; 10-10-2008 at 04:29 AM..

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Old 10-10-2008, 04:31 AM

Another Poem :) Enjoy!

Little Star

My little star
My only light
The bit of sanity in my world
To warm to touch
To precious to keep
Burned I am again by you
I gravitate towards you
Rotate around you
You are the center
The light
The soul giver of life
My friend
My torturer
My of all, my love
Little star
In the sky
In my eyes
Worth a world of unseen wrath
Paid in tears
Sung silently at night
As I wonder what you are
And if I can trade a dimond for you
Little star
Where are you?
So red and bright
Full of life
Anger, suppressed love
Only light
Only love
Will you burst
Will you flame
Kill us all
Its all the same
Little star
Little love
That’s all I want
And you take from me
As if you where a black hole
And I to feed on
Feed on my heart almost gone
Only light
Sucking dry
I hope, I pray
You make me cry
Little star
Little
Star past the clouds
Unto you
So beautiful
Magnificent
My inspiration
My pain
My regret, and reason to live
My love
My…
Little star

 


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