Well, I found this in my binder and I thought that I'd share it with everyone.

Side Effects to Breathing
Betrayl, anyone?
A sliver platter to serve it on, as well?
My dear, say yes, say yes!
I would love to bring it to you,
Along with heartbreak
And suffering.


Drabble at best, but it made me smile when I read it. I like it and I wish for some constructive criticism, so... reply away, dearies.

Hmm that's the kind of poem that would go well with a small doodle in a scrapbook or something.

Well, I can't draw really, so little drabbles are my doodles. Any constructive crit?

I like the poem but I don't get the the title.
Explain to me?

What a great poem, you fit a lot into very few lines!