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Old 01-15-2009, 02:58 AM

Alright, I shall be putting my past poetry first, then random new ones I make up on the spot. If any of the poetry sounds like somebody else did it, inform me. It seems as though I can make a poem that sound almost like another one... :stare: It was one about Chaos... and spirits rising. That one I'm Not going to put up... ;cause I can't find it right now.
Anyway, here's my first poem... from the past:
To Aunt Connie
'Sadness roams my heart today.
A woman lost, torn away.
From this empty world she goes,
into thy holy rest.'

Short, I know, but I didn't think my long version was all that great... :(

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Old 01-18-2009, 09:55 AM

It's neat.. Kind of short to be significant to anyone who doesn't know your aunt, because while it's effective, we don't really feel the emotion.

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Old 01-18-2009, 05:27 PM

I have a longer version... but I don't think it it's good enough to be put up... The feeling might be better known from that. ^-^'

 



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