i wrote this one day when i felt a little sick of being not able to be with my cousin ever and im not sure if anyone would like my but i write my own poems of my own free will so don't give me any advice of what i should do on this poem because i like it the way it is.is that alright?well here it is try to enjoy it!its not the greatest poem btw -sweats-
Summer day
Tick tock goes th clock while you play outside
laughing,jumping,having fun.tick tock goes the clock
as we come inside and have lunch all together we all
talk and laugh,after lunch we play games and fall on the
ground laughing because we are having a lot of fun,tick tock
goes the clock as we change our clothes and into our swimsuits
we get into the car and as my aunt drives we laugh and sing funny
songs,tick tock goes the clock as we jump into the pool and swim and
have fun on a summer day as the blazing sun sees 3 girls having a great
summer day.

this is very good. I like it.

thanks it must not be too good cause i only
got one comment T_T thanks for commenting

I think it's so cute <333

YAY!More commenters!!!!!thankies n_n

I think that this odd poem is very truethfull.

thank you!its odd?that word never popped into my head but i think some
parts are odd thank you for the comment it is suppose to be truthful because
i thought of this when i was sad i couldn't see my cousin and i was sad so i thought
of our happy moments n_n im trying to make a spring one so i'll keep my fans or visitors
posted i dunno why i said fans i feel famous today i guess