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Old 05-17-2009, 08:00 PM

Mother...
You filled my days with rainbow lights,
Fairytales and sweet dream nights,
A kiss to wipe away my tears,
Gingerbread to ease my fears.
You gave the gift of life to me
And then in love, you set me free.
I thank you for your tender care,
For deep warm hugs and being there.
I hope that when you think of me
A part of you
You'll always see.

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Old 05-27-2009, 07:46 PM

It's a very lovely poem but i think it is a little incomplete, why don't u add a few more lines to it?

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Old 06-14-2009, 06:42 PM

Ooh, that' s a real good poem. Better than I could ever do xD It sounds complete to me, it tells a short story of him/her growing up.

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Old 08-18-2009, 03:00 PM

awww thats so beautiful you did a wonderful job

 


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