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Old 08-01-2009, 09:42 PM

Will someone Help me?
Will someone Stop you?
You may not hit or punch or Bite
But you words are far Worse

Each word you say cuts me a little deeper
Each cut makes my bleed a little more
Each drop of blood makes me cry a little louder
And my cries of pain go un-heard
Then I die a little more

If I try to stop you your word become sharper
If I try to ignore you your word get dipped in poison
If I just sit there and listen my dream get crushed and turned into nightmares
If I run will you follow laughing at my fear

Is there any way out?
Is there a light in my darkness?
Will there be someone to help me in this nightmare?
Will you finally stop when you see my hidden tears?

The fire of my will to live is dieing
My heart is slowly turning to dust
The pain will never go away
And I’m only starting to feel numb

Is someone there watching me?
Oh wait it is only death
Why are you here seeing my every move?
Will you be the person to see my final moments?

Can you care enough to kill me now?
Oh please stop my internal pain
I don’t care if I’m too young to die
For it feels like I’m already dead inside

Can someone help me?
Can someone stop you?
Thought it might be to late now
For Now I Sleep Forever In A Wooden Box.

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Old 08-01-2009, 10:01 PM

Very deep. I get the sentiment completely. The form is interesting. Was there a reason you capitalized certain words in the middle of the sentence?

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Old 08-02-2009, 04:29 AM

To pull them out, so it makes it more dramatic.

 


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