
08-12-2009, 05:34 PM
Hey hey, new to this site as of yesterday and thought that I would post up a bunch of my poems and stuff before I went to transfer some of my writing here as well. This can be the place where the start of my short stuff goes up such as poems and the whatnot. At the moment I will only divulge a few of the ones that are somewhat recent and then later I may add some more if I find myself in the mood.
Any feedback, even 'you suck', would be madly appreciated and any comments on why I suck specifically will earn you a cookie. I am posting so I can get feedback. So get to it my literary little disciples. *sits on throne of textual skulls*
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MAYBE WE CAN BE TOGETHER
My favorite things
All rearranged
Yesterday now feeling strange
Best of all my worldly views
Everyday I live for you
When the snow began to fall
Everything turned fanciful
Carting logs to keep you warm
All the things that we’d sworn
Nestle close within my the touch of wanting waiting arms
Beautiful as morning dew
Everyday I live for you
Too many reasons
Ogled grace
Glowing like the stars in space
Exactly perfect
Truest glow
Her eyes can see my soul
Every detail fresh as snow
Resounds in love I know
Maybe we can be together, happy and alone
And maybe we can be together, let our love be known
Your own voice must thus decide
Because this love may take one side
Every angle, every side
Utmost wanting, should we try
It would be like golden skies
Maybe we can be together, maybe you and I
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FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU
As I stuck the floor
And I beckoned why
Your heel tore my heart out
Along with my eye
Falling from graces
Like falling from god
Falling from Graceland
Had broke my façade
That everything’s holy
Anything good
I sold my soul
To bury the wood
To burn at the ashes
Of solemn defeat
Why sell my pride
When I sell my beliefs
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Falling in love
Is like falling for lies
Selling my self
Sold me out by my eyes
Why
Why are together in hatred
Why we still here
What is there to know
Why is love always a b(a)tch
When we are always alone
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Call when I’m crying
And hold close to me
Wrap me in talons
And make my heart bleed
I want to see you
Too see how you hurt
Bleed into me
And let me know that it worked
I met a man
Who stood all alone
In the forest where
I played
One day he stood
Rotting from away
The knife within his brain
I wish I was there
I wish that I could care
I wish I was rotting like he
But the symptoms still persist
And I still hadn’t kiss
Your breast with a bullet’s teat
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Falling in love
Is like falling for lies
Selling my self
Sold me out by my eyes
Why
Why are together in hatred
Why we still here
What is there to know
Why is love always a b(a)tch
When we are always alone
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Cold turkey could
Describe the sights
The cold I feel inside
Its like burning in blackness
Like velvety sighs
Its like looking at me
Who is looking through eyes
That are coated by blood
And are twisted by lies
Its like falling for you wasn’t right\
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