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Old 08-12-2009, 05:34 PM

Hey hey, new to this site as of yesterday and thought that I would post up a bunch of my poems and stuff before I went to transfer some of my writing here as well. This can be the place where the start of my short stuff goes up such as poems and the whatnot. At the moment I will only divulge a few of the ones that are somewhat recent and then later I may add some more if I find myself in the mood.

Any feedback, even 'you suck', would be madly appreciated and any comments on why I suck specifically will earn you a cookie. I am posting so I can get feedback. So get to it my literary little disciples. *sits on throne of textual skulls*
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MAYBE WE CAN BE TOGETHER

My favorite things
All rearranged
Yesterday now feeling strange
Best of all my worldly views
Everyday I live for you

When the snow began to fall
Everything turned fanciful

Carting logs to keep you warm
All the things that we’d sworn
Nestle close within my the touch of wanting waiting arms

Beautiful as morning dew
Everyday I live for you

Too many reasons
Ogled grace
Glowing like the stars in space
Exactly perfect
Truest glow
Her eyes can see my soul
Every detail fresh as snow
Resounds in love I know

Maybe we can be together, happy and alone
And maybe we can be together, let our love be known
Your own voice must thus decide
Because this love may take one side
Every angle, every side

Utmost wanting, should we try

It would be like golden skies

Maybe we can be together, maybe you and I
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FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU

As I stuck the floor
And I beckoned why
Your heel tore my heart out
Along with my eye

Falling from graces
Like falling from god
Falling from Graceland
Had broke my façade

That everything’s holy
Anything good

I sold my soul
To bury the wood
To burn at the ashes
Of solemn defeat
Why sell my pride
When I sell my beliefs

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Falling in love
Is like falling for lies
Selling my self
Sold me out by my eyes

Why

Why are together in hatred
Why we still here

What is there to know

Why is love always a b(a)tch
When we are always alone
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Call when I’m crying
And hold close to me
Wrap me in talons
And make my heart bleed

I want to see you
Too see how you hurt

Bleed into me
And let me know that it worked

I met a man
Who stood all alone
In the forest where
I played

One day he stood
Rotting from away
The knife within his brain

I wish I was there
I wish that I could care
I wish I was rotting like he

But the symptoms still persist
And I still hadn’t kiss
Your breast with a bullet’s teat

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Falling in love
Is like falling for lies
Selling my self
Sold me out by my eyes

Why

Why are together in hatred
Why we still here

What is there to know

Why is love always a b(a)tch
When we are always alone
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Cold turkey could
Describe the sights
The cold I feel inside

Its like burning in blackness
Like velvety sighs
Its like looking at me
Who is looking through eyes
That are coated by blood
And are twisted by lies
Its like falling for you wasn’t right\

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Old 08-13-2009, 05:04 AM

ANTITHESIS OF DEBATE

Oh joyous sounds
My head unhinged
The silence all about
There is no lingering want or pain
No symbol of my doubts

There is this time
No dismissal to be heard
I am here within your presence
I am here within your presence
And I am grateful to be yours

Those three flown
The ribbons cast to you
All shine for me
For I am with you too

Whatever things you spoke
Whatever you have journeyed through
I am for them all, my dear
For there are still in you

If she must be a piece of you
As this I know is true
Then I rest my soul
Without strife or toll
For this, my love's own rule

Joyous
Oh joyous sounds unhinged
That I was dead
But once more in you I live

Be there those who came
Or be there simply blame
There is nothing to forgive
For I was within my way
And in you I've found my way
I live on oh joyousness of sounds
Oh joyousness of finding
That tonight you're still around

 


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