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Old 08-19-2009, 03:39 AM

Poem i wrote:

Poems are just the funniest things,
They’re like stories with fancy, magical wings.
They can make you feel happy or make you cry,
They can make you feel worried or make you sigh.
Poems are masterpieces, music, beauty and galore,
Filled with laughter, enjoyment and so much more.
They’re carefully chosen and tied so tight,
That the letters stand out as you write.
They’re a beautiful song, they sing like birds,
And yet, they are only words.

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Old 09-05-2009, 06:44 PM

Amazing. My ONLY comment is that the syllables are a little off beat which makes keeping a rhythm when reading a little difficult. *applause* but the rest is truly amazing.

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Old 09-13-2009, 08:32 PM

Thanks, technically I made it a year ago. It's been sitting on a computer file, waiting for me to open it ^^

 


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