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Old 09-04-2009, 05:08 AM

Sensory poem


"clouds"

White.
Tastes like fluffy whipped cream.
Clouds smell Like perfume.
They Remind me of Happiness.
Clouds sound like a whisper moving through the wind,
and they make me feel like flying!

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Old 09-04-2009, 05:11 AM

~touch~
~smell~
~sight~
~sound~
~taste~

"Impossible," they say.
You Weren't here...
you were invisible,
Silent, miles away.
But I could Feel you... smell you... see you... hear you... taste you...
Feel your arms around me.
Smell your masculine aroma.
See your enchanting blue eyes.
Hear your soothing voice.
Taste your ice-cold lips against my own.
I could NEVER Forget!

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Old 09-04-2009, 05:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Vanessa Hatake View Post
~touch~
~smell~
~sight~
~sound~
~taste~

"Impossible," they say.
You Weren't here...
you were invisible,
Silent, miles away.
But I could Feel you... smell you... see you... hear you... taste you...
Feel your arms around me.
Smell your masculine aroma.
See your enchanting blue eyes.
Hear your soothing voice.
Taste your ice-cold lips against my own.
I could NEVER Forget!
More will Be added soon! <3 ^.^ should've qouted the second poem! XD

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Old 09-04-2009, 10:43 PM

Vanessa, I've moved this into our Poetry subforum. Hopefully you'll get some more commnts here. :yes:

And don't worry about bumping your thread - We allow double posting when you're writing your pieces, but this forum is fairly slow moving so there is no need to double post otherwise. :yes:

 


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