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Old 09-06-2009, 01:52 AM

Is not the law of nature to be followed?
Is not all who live to follow these laws?
Are not parents to love their child?
Are not children to learn to love from their parents?
Then why do I never find love in my parent's hearts?
Why do I have to be someone I am not for them to smile?
Why is love a fairy tale?
Why isn't our dreams more than dreams?
We grow up
We grow to weary and to blind to keep hold of dreams
The things we held in our small childish hearts die
Is this not true?
It seems that ounce we reach a certain age we can not do things as we dreamed
The law of nature forbids it
It forbids all those who's hearts yern for another not of their race or not their kind
The law is wrong
We know that this is true
Love is a right that should not be used against
It should not be refused
This being refused is the sorce of evil
All evil
Yet no one stands and fights this law
No one is willing to challenge the gods
But is not strength from the heart?
And is not your strength of heart from love?
If love is taken we are nothing
We must stand against this unjust
We must stand agains this unjust, this law of nature
Where do you stand?
-Seer Of the Future age 8


I wrote this when I was 8 and thought of how good it was and desided to put it on hear. I stand against this law of nature. So tell me where do you stand? And if you have any poetry like this please post!


Watching Perfection

Perfection walks in front of me
so close,
but so far from my reach.

Heart screaming
for him,
and only him.

Watching and wishing from a far
seeing him,
the only one in the crowd.

Pain in my chest about to expload
from all the hope,
I feel.

How is it wrong
when love,
rings ture?

A small glint of hope
in the distance,
seeming impossible.

My love forbidden
by this unwritten law,
so I watch.

Waiting for my time
my only chance,
to tell him the truth.

I love him.


He is Perfection

Tall
Dark
Handsome,
Three words
describe my perfect stranger.
Tall,
but proportions perfect
in every way
his features chizzled to perfection
by the gods themselves.
Dark,
skin
kissed by the sun
making his glow
nothing but perfect.
Handsome,
hair of polished gold
soft and smooth
angled features
yet soft
smoldering eyes
alight with emotion
and deeper than the sea.
He is perfection.

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Old 09-06-2009, 04:50 AM

wow thats amazing :-O
and i do stand against that law of nature

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Old 09-07-2009, 07:27 PM

Thank you. It is nothing really I did have to reword it a bit but really that's how I wrote it practically.

 


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