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Less_Than_Forgotten
Insanity is a Myth
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09-21-2009, 01:26 AM
Blackness Inside
Cold and black is my heart
All thats left is an ice cold stare
All the tears i had are now dried up
The blood in my veins flowing black
Ice cold to the touch
The living dead is what I am
What once drove me on is now killing me
What once saved me now is condemning me
A blackness is taking over
And theres no saving me now
Please tell me honestly what you think of this, I can take any criticism that you have and any advice that you have and I will take it to heart
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Hresvelgr
It's 11PM, do you know where you...
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09-21-2009, 01:53 AM
/standing applause. Can i borrow your creativity for creative writing please?!!?!
I really like it. Do you have any more?
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Less_Than_Forgotten
Insanity is a Myth
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09-21-2009, 02:06 AM
I have more on my gaia account, 'cept they are all on the depressing side. You can use it if you like
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Less_Than_Forgotten
Insanity is a Myth
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09-21-2009, 02:10 AM
Through those tired eyes you see the world crumbling
With the worn hands you hold yourself
Not feeling safe anywhere but within your own arms
The sky burns red from the fires in the city
Black smoke rising all around your glass sanctuary
As you stand before the vast burning city before you
You shed a single tear
All this power and triumph
And not a single soul to share it with
Great general of war
You are alone in this world
This world you have turned to ashes
The world you turned to hell
I need help titling this, my creativity kinda ran dry when I got to the title. Any help will be appreciated
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Knerd
I put the K in "Misspelling"
☆☆ Assistant Administrator
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09-21-2009, 06:37 PM
Less_Than_Forgotten, I've merged your two threads and moved them into our Poetry subforum. From now on, please update this thread with all of your new pieces. Each user is only allowed to have one Poetry topic. :yes:
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Less_Than_Forgotten
Insanity is a Myth
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09-21-2009, 07:37 PM
Thank you, I'm still really new to this
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Seraphinite
(-.-)zzZ
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09-21-2009, 11:59 PM
Very good, like always, Megankins.
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Less_Than_Forgotten
Insanity is a Myth
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09-22-2009, 12:11 AM
Thank you Sera
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Seraphinite
(-.-)zzZ
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09-22-2009, 03:22 AM
Your welcome ^-^
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Less_Than_Forgotten
Insanity is a Myth
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09-22-2009, 03:54 AM
whats with the dog?
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