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Old 09-23-2009, 06:14 PM

(I wrote this after I felt like I lost somebody that I once knew. We still talk, but for some reason I suddenly see him as a stranger...)


One week

A week ago I smiled
A week ago I was with you
We began to know each other
We started to get along with one another

Yesterday I prayed
Yesterday I waited for a call
I began wondering about you
I hoped that you would get through

Today I cried
Today I found out the truth
You sent me filled with tears
You and I were ending it here

After that I changed my ways
I faked my smile
I faked my laughter
You do not know that I’m a good actor

At the end of the day
My skies turned blue to grey
This heart I have given you
Is now torn in two

I’ve taken big risks
I’ve broken many promises
I pushed away my fears
Now here I am in tears


Just a week ago I was with you
One week can change a person’s mind
One week can change a person
But can one week…

Heal and mend this broken, selfish, heart of mine

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Old 09-23-2009, 06:23 PM

wow, i know what yout mean about feeling like you lost someone close to you but that poem just says it all. i hope you and that person reconnect again. that really was amazing, probably because it was so close to the heart. good luck out there

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Old 09-23-2009, 06:39 PM

Thank you very much there.
Recently I have been down and I don't think he understands how much he changed me. I actually thought he understood my circumstance and that's why i was with him. Sometimes I want to punch him the face, but then I break down crying. I don't know how I'm supposed to feel right now.

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Old 09-24-2009, 05:48 PM

ChibiMaru-Chan, I've gone ahead and moved this to our Poetry subforum for you. :yes:

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Old 09-24-2009, 06:23 PM

Thank you very much! Now I can find my poem without searching like crazy! :D

 


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